Without a breath



Without a breath
Speaking the dialogues
Of my noisy neighbours
This is ridiculous
I can't sleep
Fighting is their main aim
If you face the same problem
Take a pen and write down
Then practise to speak
Without a breath

Here I begin
Until I fall fast asleep zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz..............




Words by Zainab
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Written on 2006-10-23 at 11:04

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Emeka Chike Nwogu
A good one indeed. Noisy neighbors! They can get on your nerves. Good writing.
2006-10-28


Jessica Rexroat
I agree with Kathy, I love your subject matter, I feel like I can relate...keep writing like this it is refreshing
2006-10-26


Saga
And may you have very sweet dreams, darling!!!
2006-10-24


Kathy Lockhart
I love this phrase:
"If you face the same problem
Take a pen and write down
Then practise to speak
Without a breath"
It is a great expression of writing. xx
2006-10-23


gills
This is buetiful :)
2006-10-23