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Am I talking to a deaf


Am I talking to a deaf?
There is nothing funny to laugh
Pretending like you can't hear
Nor can you see my tears
Today you are deaf
Tomorrow I'll be next

But before I walk away
I want to remind you something
What you usually say
Boys don't cry

Let me tell you young man
You are wrong
Boys do cry
And you are on the way
Take care,
Good bye!



By Zainab copyright 21 January 2007




Words by Zainab
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Written on 2007-01-21 at 05:55

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amos onwukwe
Today you are deaf
Tomorrow I'll be next...

Love those lines. Nice one
2016-05-05



you did right..:)
2009-06-03


uma
wow...this is what i want to do sometimes...nice
love
uma
2007-05-23


F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
pain and frustration coming through strongly for me in this... the wording is really good to get that feeling across... some people are like that... don't realize what they say or do, and certainly don't realize what they have in their hands... until it's too late... but good not to stick around until they realize it though... so much a heart can take eh... very emotive write, delivered very well... thanks for sharing :f *hugs* xx
2007-04-08


goran
wow, a great one,
and off course guys do cry, i hope we were not but truth is its all about our hearts, its crazy how we spend our life loving someone and what we get in return some tear drops,

great write that I'm bookmarking, keep it up.
2007-03-16


Amanda K
wow !!you did shooooooot him. i love the tone here.

love ya,
2007-02-13


salem
oh this is nice
thanx zainab
2007-01-21


Zainab
JUst some words
Though to womit
And I did..................
2007-01-21


Zainab
:.)
2007-01-21