Your I love you

"Your I love you"
Means nothing to me,
That was before,
When I was mad about you!

"Your I love you"
Go and tell it to someone else!
Again don't dare,
To make some move over me.

"Your I love you"
Has no value now,
You are a player,
Don't try to act, like you don't know.

"Your I love you"
Keep it to yourself,
Now all the girls don't want you,
A dog would also refuse it too.

By Zainab copyright 15 January 2007

Poetry by Zainab
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Written on 2007-01-15 at 08:58

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Amanda K
My God he must be dably offended. you broke his heart but he seemed deserving it after all. i liked the last so strong

A dog would also refuse it too


Thanks for the comment!
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liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
I really like how you have worded
this - it's full of anger but nicely worded.

You go girl the last two stanza's rock
I esp love "A dog would also refuse it too."



i love the attitude" bye bye men"
it is like the coming of age of women.