learning curves

trace your tongue across my skin
invoke an elemental sin
burnished hues await your touch
the curvatures are aching much
for satiation felt and true
as lying here i ache for you
describe the form that now you seek
with lingering fingers make me weak
remembering contures firm yet soft
places to revisit oft
until you know what lies therein
when invoking elemental sin





Poetry by la tristesse
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Written on 2006-10-31 at 01:55

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liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
You invoke wonderful images
in this.

liz
2006-11-01


brian paglia
Well done!You've challenged me to revisit a part of myself that is rusty to say the least.Sometimes I wonder if I should call my ex-girlfriends and ask for all my poetry back.Believe it or not,I once was able to capture the best that love has to offer.
Awesome poem!!!
2006-10-31