a friend of mine has a mom waiting for a liver transplant
and she is constantly sick and stuff. and my friend is really
depressed about it so i wrote her this poem hoping it would make
her and her mom feel better and it did.

time as i see it

time as i See it has many different meanings

but the one i am talking about bring's me closer

to you.The smile,the laughs all the momoeries

we have made.it all makes the life we have timeless

and never ending and as we talk and hold hands telling

each other of how we will never stop careing just makes me

glad you're my mom and me your daughter.

Poetry by AmonTheDark
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Written on 2005-10-05 at 20:16

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John Ashleigh
A very loving poem, brilliant.

--- I think you should just space it out a little, though.