Love is beautiful but Its intentions can destroy.

Love's Reduction

Love to you was just an object

Used for self-destruction

You misused the purpose of love

Your love powered seduction

Brought the safety of worlds and cities

Falling to their knees

Kindly words could not prevent

Love's devastating breeze

A tool to mislead and decieve

The young and faint-hearted

Why did you use this angelic ruse

Why had this trend ever started

I can only watch your soul

Slip into the night

And watch the one I held so dear

Die from malice and spite

Poetry by Coolaaron88
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Written on 2006-11-19 at 00:30

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P. Vijay Kumar
Very well written Aaron. I particularly liked the line ' ...your soul slip into the night'.

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excellent poem aaron. i love how you used the colors on specific words. it really jumped out and caught my attention.

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Very nicely done. I especially like the colored words; they fit into your style perfectly.