What can I really say, we all need a release (Rest In Pieces)

Calm Endings

It seemed like a normal day

When I last saw your face

Emotions inside took a fast turn

What did you replace

The innocents you held within

Vanished without a trace

Did life pour its problems out

Just strip away your grace

One summer night alone in bed

You found a silent escape

Something that would numb the pain

A vague idea took shape

One pull of the trigger

Corrected everlasting dread

I can say your finally happy

Now your wanting is dead

Poetry by Coolaaron88
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Written on 2006-11-19 at 07:19

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Amanda K
mysterious in some way but delivers a deep pain.

keep it up,

Language: 4
Format: 3
Mood: 3
Overall: 4

david gerardino
What did you replace,makes the poem...10

Language: 4
Format: 3
Mood: 5
Overall: 3

lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
a very moving text Aaron and so strong in metaphors.

i had truoble personally with the coloured words but it does not detract from the worth of the poem rgds mike

Language: 5
Format: 4
Mood: 4
Overall: 5