It's true everytime 13 has been a unlucky day for me but this time it the luckiest day for me.
And this is about my good feeling of the date 13 I now can believe 13 is not always unlucky^^ like I always believe.
I won a in a stroy contest but I didn't

Date 13

It used to be my unluckiest day
Whether I fast or pray
Nothing would ever change
Everything would remain the same
Evil and more strange

It used to be my unluckiest day
I wonder a miracle happen today
I feel like I'm top of the world
Smiling as if,
I'm holding a basket of gold

It used to be my unluckiest day
Thanks to God once in my life time I can say
You are right mom & dad
13 can also be a lucky number
Like how you always said

Poetry by Zainab
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Written on 2006-12-13 at 07:50

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Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
you are beautiful and talented and I am so proud of you my sweet daughter. love you!

I won a in a stroy contest but I didn't want to include becoz thats what are poem for we sometime have to keep the one who are reading keep guesing until the end of the poem he or she shall be asking whats that
The same like i did in my other poems I just like
One of the poem was All the boys loved me you can see the same thing^^

Mood: 5

Let the poem be.
You are the poet
Not really the poem.
Or perhaps personality
In the peom.

Let me tell you something you might not know, you have to be very careful whenever you are writing anything at all. Yes, you might know that you ca write without telling any story and that's exactly what you've done with this piece. That day, which is today in that poem that 13 made you happy and your spirit soars, you didn't not in any way tell in the poem what really made you happy. Yes you are happy, but I can't visualise what made you happy.

Maybe when you tell the eact thing that made you happy, my tone will change and tell anyother thing.

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lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
then you must be in love Zainab if thats the reason well done on the romantic in this text rgds mike but whatever a lovley poem

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For the first time
I just can't believe this^^

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