am i awake or dreaming?

Elemental Passion

Ice cold, blue eyes
pulling me down;
drowning in a kiss.
Fire skin
burning beneath my fingertips.
Breath blowing in my ear;
whispers barely passing lips.
Grass bending under weight;
a soft bed to lie on.
Dark blankness
with mingled joy;
I don't even know what I feel anymore.

Poetry by Tyr-fira
Read 960 times
Written on 2005-10-18 at 01:15

Tags Romance  Element  Passion 

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whatever you feel, it's just beautiful!

Dreams are what we make of them,yet it appears you have captured one here, well done.

Very passionate and sweet. Dreams are reality if you have lived through the emotions. A beautiful piece here. Thanks for taking me through your journey.

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you are dreaming, it is all a dream, wrapped in cellophane.

a nice piece, just that e on breathe really standing out.

breathe blowing... - breath blowing.