i can FEEL it




It feels to me to scream aloud,
When my lips have no words

It feels to me to throw away my mind,
When there's awake no thought

It feels me to swallow the black blood,
When the throat has discontentfully dried

It feels to me to tear off the skin,
When the fresh wounds penetrate within

It feels to me the pain of a broken chest,
When the heart floats in tears

It feels to me in the darkest cave of hell,
When people mock on the plight

It feels to me being dragged on the pointed rocks,
When there's no path left to be relied

It feels to me all the same,
When not any ones for me alive...




Poetry by zeeshan
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Written on 2006-12-18 at 21:04

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charley60
Wow, this was a very gripping write. It was written with so much feeling. It is that way in this world as your last line read--when there is no one there. You write well.
2007-01-30


Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
Zee you have written a very profound poem filled with vivid imagery that reveals the pain of brokeness and loss
2006-12-19