YOU

your laugh sounds like the wind
swirling around my body and
tinkling my chimes gently.

your brown mane of hair
tickles my nose as we lay
in the green grass breathing the country air.

Piercing blue green eyes
are filled with love and wonder
at the beauty in the world.

Soft blood red lips lean in for a kiss

....and then i wake up to my alarm.

04/01/07



Poetry by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-01-04 at 11:39

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betsy Firefly
Have you ever tried to close your eyes and go back into the dream for a few minutes?
2007-01-06


Mr.Mist
A sweet dream..sounded so real..It put some great pictures to my head..A dream for everyone to enjoy..Thanx for sharing this with us.. -mr.m
2007-01-05


wee2souls
Dang alarms always ruin the best part of the dream!!
:))lovely read and from the heart!! well you do know
dreams really do come true IF YOU BELIEVE!:))
hugs to you
cindymac
2007-01-05


weirdzarun
Such a warm, cozy sensation fills my thought when I glide through this piece. And at the end, I couldn't help but think to my self, "Oh yeah. I know THAT feeling too."
2007-01-05


Chris Fernie
Dear Liz,

I bet the clock had a smile on its face! One for bookmarking, I think.

Happy New Year!

Cheers, Chris x

PS Pity about the Ashes... Englishmen don't travel well... well, that's my pathetic excuse.
2007-01-04


Phyllis J. Rhodes
shoot that dadgum alarm!!!
I was really into to this beautifully painted
piece of word art and then BUZZZZZZZZ!
Where's my Dirty Harry Special????
2007-01-04


Kathy Lockhart
oh if our dreams became real. At least dreams like this one. This is full of colorful imagery. You poetry is growing, blooming. Well done Liz!
2007-01-04