My mum doesn't want me to go to america to as she put it "to meet some stranger you've met on the internet" and i'm adament i'm going, so....
A child-like anger would sound better but doesn't fit the syllable count =)
~Liz~


Disapproving Love[haiku]


A childs anger reigns
Mother doesn't understand
why you have my love....

16/01/07



Haiku by liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2007-01-16 at 01:18

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Kathy Lockhart
Mums are like that. I would be the same way. But, take one step at a time.
You are writing some very good poetry Liz. Love has fortified and inspired your "pen."
2007-01-16


weirdzarun
Man, what a downer. Come to america! We have cookies and san fransisco!
2007-01-16



I like it...very true...I comepletely understand. Liz you make me smile, thank you so much!!!!!

<3
Kiva

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2007-01-16