Winston Latanafrancia Soldevilla
I felt I was elated to the seventh heaven upon reading your poem. I love these lines particularly"

Why does my heart ripple like a pebble across a placid pond?
You opened a gate I thought was forever closed
Making me believe in the power of love
And when you unlocked the poetry of my soul
Disarming these walls of stone
Stripping me of every defense
My utter vulnerbility revealed

Surrendering

I fell so helplessly
Exquisitley
In love with you " Tongue tied, I was. Very very romantic!
2008-08-12

MAXreturns
And once again your words

Gently touch the deepest of my soul

Bringing those emotions i forget about them at all

When nearly i was gone and seconds from my fall

Thanks blue for this passionate words....

:)

~MAX
2007-07-06

Amanda K
what a sweet strong text. simple words and purelly felt. juts loved it and will bookmark it.

love your poems,
Amanda
2007-02-12

Colin Skilton
Love poems and songs are a great source of that ah factor when they work well. Blue this does just that, wanting to share the moment with the writer and feel the love you have written.
Thankyou for sharing with us.
Colin.
2007-01-21

Saga
Beautifully loving and caring as well as longing sweetie pumpkin!!!
2007-01-19

Kathy Lockhart
Aaah Blue, this is a lovely sweetly flowing poem. The title and the poetry are perfect! Nice to read you again.
2007-01-18

liz munro
I have only just started to read and
write love poems and the way you
have written this with the metaphors
like the pond ripples used is wonderful.

This remindes me of someone I
love so much and your poem
expresses my feelings.

Liz
2007-01-18

Christian Lanciai
Long time no see! Welcome back!
2007-01-18

salem
so beautiful one
skills in picking words
thanxxxxxx
2007-01-18

lastromantichero
this is a beautiful poem from you
for a love well done rgds mike
2007-01-18