In repsonse to Kathy Lockhart

Standing Ovation ~Aaron Style~

Lonely women sit and wait
As time controls their random fate
By the window, the world a stage
The skies look on at sporatic rage
The fear within is the only rose
Received at my entrancing shows
The tears I cry impale my lie
The curtains close my last good-bye
Many nights I've wondered what to do
To subside the pain that tries to ensue
My audience leaves my world a maze
My stage a wreck; the scene ablaze
It takes time to try and erase
The scars ingrained across my face
My masks could hide my shallow pain
Yet that facades so hard to maintain
Lonely women sit and wait
As curtains close this gate
I'll take my rose and fade from view
Your rose was plenty; if you only knew

Poetry by Coolaaron88
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Written on 2007-01-19 at 04:27

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You really do have talent, i'll give you that. I do hope you keep writing.

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oh my god aaron. that was really good. i know its been a while since i have commented one of your poems. i should probably say more... but i'm a little brain dead at the moment. sorry i dont have something smarter to say. :) anyhoo i loved the poem. it was really really good.

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Liza Daquini
My words seems so poor after reading this beautiful masterpiece... You've been given such a beautiful gift in this life,and I can see that you're taking well care of it!Bravo,bravo,bravo!Lots of love and light /Liza

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Kathy Lockhart
oh Aaron this is so beautiful. I am amazed at your talent. Thank you for this wonderful response. I struggle for the right words to express to you how this makes me feel. bookmarked

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a very nice poem and what inspiration there is in this lady's texts welldone rgds mike

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