my veiw of what heaven looks like


A Beautiful Place

I tried to be so very kind
I truly didn't think you'd mind.
You really thought I didn't care
Although I said I'd take you there.
A place where beauty is beyond compare
A place where breeze flows through your hair.
The grass there is green
The people they are all so lean.
The sky there is always blue
They will all notice you.
Without your thoughts ever having to cease
There your mind is always at peace.
All you have got to do is to die
I know it will hurt and your family will cry.
But first you have to atone for your sins
You will be judged for which place you go in.
God will forgive even a murderous crime
As long as you paid for it by doing the time.
Just remember these words "God forgives all"
The only exception is if suicide's your downfall.
People in heaven walk with such grace
It truly is a beautiful place.
What right do I have to tell you the way?
For my line of work let me just say...
I am death by night and angel by day.




Poetry by Kristina
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Written on 2007-02-23 at 02:52

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betsy Firefly
A fascinating write - as tho' you've been there.
remember we are only forgiven because of the 'time and price'
Christ paid, tho'.

Can't wait to read more of your poems.
2007-02-23