Suffocation

Lost in my island of dreams;
I am lost..no one hears my scream,
Why do I dream so high..anybody tell me why!
That I get crestfallen and sigh!

I wish I could be what I want to be,
I wish I could touch the sky,
I wish I could dive deep into the sea!

Every little thing I want to achieve!
Every little thing I take seriously!
Cant I relax and listen to what my heart hails?
Rather than turning frustratingly pale!

I keep brooding over little things,
Keep brooding over and over again!
I find myself suffocated ...and I am laid back
Laid back in my dreams...
I want to break free....
Set me in jamboree!




Poetry by suraj
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Written on 2007-03-18 at 06:43

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Autie
There is a very Caribbean flavor in this poem, the use of the words hail and jamboree. Well it communicates that to me because where i live i have had the honor to feel the Caribbean isle groove.

I really enjoyed reading it, though it was more about wishes taht seem not to be fulfilled that suffocation itself.

Great Job!!

Autie

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2007-03-18