This is unfinished as well....my mind is dull and void...


Untitled for now...

A heart broken into a million pieces so small
I wonder if I'll ever find them all
I feel worthless and used
I am left alone and confused

I thought every thing was great
End the end, you can't tempt fate
I wish I knew what went wrong
I think together we belong

A broken heart that never lies
A stream of tears that never dries
I can't get the thoughts out of my head
The consensus says I'm better off dead







Poetry by SomThinWikid
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Written on 2005-11-21 at 14:42

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Surei
So much sadness! All your poems seem to be sad...makes you wonder if this world is so wonderful if people hurt so much like you do....

((HUGS))
2005-11-27


Black Knight
I see - a cry of lonely soul.
I want - that your tears have stopped to fall.
I feel - from your sadness it's only small part.
I hope - you can gather your heart.
2005-11-21


John Ashleigh
Sad, your poems are. Bad, your poems are not. I love the way you find a solution for every sentance. How and when and why it was written just echoes in my mind, helotry to it's grave is what you percept to me.

Good, yet again.

Title?: Defalcation sustained. - credit me if used ;)
2005-11-21


penfold18
This is anything but a dull mind, it sounds like a lot of hurt went into this, it is well compiled :-)
2005-11-21