Gone

I died today
An empty shell
On auto-pilot is
all you'll ever see of me

Wasted space and
Wasted air is all I use
Nothing on the inside
Broken and crushed

Gone forever
No hope remains
No one can save
What you murdered




Poetry by SomThinWikid
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Written on 2005-11-21 at 17:56

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Christian Ward
This is an excellent poem, so heartfelt and honest. You can feel the emotion in every line.
2005-12-27


Surei
Beautiful! The feeling of being alone and the fact that someone killed you by rejecting you....so much sadness! I'm lost for words!
2005-11-27


John Ashleigh
SO POWERFUL!

So missing. So good.

The structure in this is nice and manumitting.
2005-11-21