I cleaned it up and changed it a little so its better. Same point though.

Just a Dream (Repost)

My life seemed like such a dream

When at first we met

Who knew time would be the bomb

Causing an imminent threat

Wasn’t our love real at first

From the front lines it would seem

Yet lies entangled with bare truth

Would burst our fairytale dream

Your attitude to what we had

Was normal and very surreal

Doubts about your whereabouts

Were sure to break this deal

All my life I wanted something

A simple love that could suffice

I found the one who could come through

Said a prayer and rolled the dice

A match was made that would soon prove

Love couldn’t stand the test of time

I was about to lose my only purpose

The sacred force that made you mine

Slowly we started to fall out of touch

I couldn’t believe my eyes

The one that brought me happiness

Was just some lover in disguise

When at first you don’t succeed

They say to try again

Although I fought with all my strength

I just couldn’t seem to win

I've accepted this split as just a loss

That I have suffered in life

I've accepted this pain that’s entered my soul

Along with the heartache and strife

One day I’ll find the will to move on

To a better place I guess

And expel the locks that bind my heart

Beneath my beating chest

Until that time my subtle pain

Will always be here to stay

When at last I accept this end

My anguish will go away

Though the thought of your smiling face

With me will always stay

Poetry by Coolaaron88
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Written on 2007-06-07 at 00:26

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Lea Foverskov
well written and clearly expressed! i love the rhyme and the flow of it.

Language: 4
Format: 4
Mood: 5
Overall: 4