don't read this if you don't like swearing


slut



chucking herself at all who pass
showing her wares and showing her arse
pouting like a whore who's hot in heat
making sure the other girls know they're beat
fighting off the women for their men
why flirt with one when you can have ten?
scheming on the boys an' saying she's bad
well go for it darlin', you're just fucking sad



Poetry by la tristesse
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Written on 2007-06-12 at 00:13

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Rob Graber
It is fun to speculate on to whom this "vigorous" message might be addressed; the best assumption, it goes without saying, is that a poem's connection with reality is, at best, indirect... The intro's caveat emptor seems appropriate... ;-,?
2007-06-12


weirdzarun
A little observation on skankdom? Very good piece. Very good work. Written with a fiery tounge!
2007-06-12


ken d williams The PoetBay support member heart!
Interesting , is she trying to forget , times of regrets , is maybe her sexuality freed , dos she feel she has something to prove , is she on top of her life , or life on top of her , is she feeling inadequit , or is she totaly adequit , in control or out of control , no ''?'' nor ''!'' as I
cant say just what aploys.

Well writan , I like poetry , I like poetry that has me thinking , & responding in kind.

All the best , Ken , take cair , my freind , Rach
2007-06-12