Boy and Girl

Boy and Girl
Girl and Boy
Someone's lover
Someone's toy

She loves him
He likes her
She knows that
He's not sure

Through a storm
Through a fire
Her heart burns
With loves desire

She once thought
He was cool
Now she knows
He's a fool

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ALTERNATE ENDING

She once thought
He was it
Now she knows
He ain't shit




Poetry by SomThinWikid
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Written on 2005-06-30 at 16:26

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Amazingfriendlyapple
Ah, the alternative ending is much better, the rime cool=fool feels somewhat geeky. This is the first poem I read on this page, and I liked it.
2005-07-01


chasingtheday The PoetBay support member heart!
arr love, sometimes we are blinded by it, and once the initial glow fades reality sets in. i think i like the first ending better.
2005-06-30