I don't like this one as much...I wanted to write more but it would've messed up the image, I think...


Bugs

They march down the alley
and onto the main street
They skuttle here and there
to dodge the human feet




Words by IronicBanana
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Written on 2006-02-03 at 21:27

Tags Bugs  Street  Feet 

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liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
what about
'they fly through the air
and into where we live
they buzz here and there
to find a place to sleep'
I think it will go well with what you've written.
Liz.
2006-02-04


PoeticProcrastination
I like that! It's actually kind of serious!! Hah, though your silly ones rock too.
2006-02-03