I always like the name Maria. I'm Maria here.

Forgotten Maria

Oh, Maria stop crying
Everything will be fine
He is always at your side
Don't lose faith.

People may not like you
Even your family veered you away
Don't be down
He won't leave you.

You don't have to live in misery
You don't deserve their treatment
You deserve the genuine love
He loves you for who you are, Maria.

Don't give up Maria
Stand in pain
Use the pain to be stronger
He gives hurt because He believes in you.

Stand Maria! Stand!
Extend your hands to Him
He loves you so much
He loves you Maria.
He does.

Poetry by Jean Thomas
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Written on 2009-07-24 at 13:17

Tags Pain  Jesus  Sad 

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I really like your change in tone of the personna. However I would have liked some rhyme, perhaps a line in each stanza that rhymes. As you have a clear structure of four lines per stanza the reader might want a rhyme to hold on to.