i made it for my gf and well i wanted to see what everyone thought? so uh.. comment plz


I have been hooked so deep in my chest.
hooked there by the very best.
so deep in my chest that to leave would mean most certain death.
for that last word of goodbye would be my last breath.
i could leave and say i was smart.
but i'm afraid that to do so i would have to rip out my heart.
couse that hook you cast is buried deep in my heart.
so i belive that im stuck on you so i must act the part.
the floundering fish.
who made that wish.
to meet the perfect girl.

Poetry by Ian
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Written on 2006-02-24 at 03:45

Tags Love  Hooked  Perfection 

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liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
Beautiful -
wish I was your g/f with poetry like this