Like a Thirsty Child


I've scribbled
A poem or two,
In my time.
Pen ever ready,
Paper too,
I have to write
The words down
Instantly,
Before they
Evaporate.

Swift as I can,
I jot down
The precious words,
Trying to catch
Them all,
Like a thirsty
Child,
In the rain.












Poetry by Esti D-G The PoetBay support member heart!
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Written on 2011-08-30 at 13:18

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liz munro The PoetBay support member heart!
Can SO relate,
that's why my Journey poem
is the fave poem i've written,
it's the only poem I've been able to recall
and not write down straight away.

Love the imagery in the last stanza

~L.~
2012-02-09


Neelima
Yes, the words/thoughts are precious.
Love your simple poem, and its flow.
2011-09-14


Stan Cooper The PoetBay support member heart!
Rain drops are falling for your poem...

I've got faith in you and know the drops will work

xxx Stan
2011-09-12


NicholasG
They are like freshly caught fish...and we, with failing hands ;-)
2011-08-31



Aye, catch them while you can!
2011-08-30