this is an exagerated story of one of my friends. who stands by with a bleeding heart that hangs on to the spear that peirces it. only so that it will not die.


An Angel Falls.

Love gone without a trace.
An angel has fallen from grace.

Thoughts swirling
Bodies twirling

The girl is confused.
The boy does not his dues.

He leaves her to die.
Leaves her to cry.

He ignores her fears.
He merely leers.

He sees not her needs.
Hears not her pleas.

He fails in his role.
She lets it roll.

He will not defend.
He will only pretend.

I stand by and frown.
She deserves a crown.

She gives her hope.
He keeps his rope.

I want her to learn.
So that she will spurn.

Love gone without a trace.
An angel has fallen from grace.




Poetry by Ian
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Written on 2006-04-29 at 19:42

Tags Love  Angel  Grace 

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Amanda Manmohan
A very heart breaking poem that was beautifully written. It sucks to see situations like this but at least you know you tried.
2006-04-30


Daybreaker
A beautiful text!

Well written!
2006-04-30


Rhia
yeah,
i know who but... she did it to herself... thugh i do feel bad
2006-04-29