to Dorothy


a rose faded young


the day you were gone
a rose faded young
no bloom nor leaf
no small bird sang
the day you were gone
a rose faded young
no bloom nor leaf
the day you were gone



Poetry by Lourdes
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Written on 2006-04-30 at 18:18

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R.K.Singh
I sense a maturity of voice in the poem's simplicity. Excellent
R K
2006-05-01


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
well done for this young lady a powerful peace of writing rgds mike
2006-04-30