from a case of spring aphasia sprung ..


a spring haiku


I thought I saw you

sitting on the edge of my tongue

feet dangling into spring abyss




Haiku by Lourdes
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Written on 2006-05-02 at 00:48

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Teala
Nice, I love the images this gives me.
2006-05-02


Christian Ward
Very clever. I enjoyed reading this. Love those images.
2006-05-02


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
hi there Lourdes

This haiku is so very clever and true to the sensations in the art form well done it is beautiful
rgds mike
2006-05-02


Amanda Manmohan
Another shockingly enthralling text from you, Lourdes! It takes real talent to write a haiku, and it takes even MORE talent to write one so wonderfully, and to make it touch your readers heart so directly. I love this one.
2006-05-02