| Love's Reduction
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2006-11-19
Very nicely done. I especially like the colored words; they fit into your style perfectly.
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| Healthy Obsession (Spin-Off)
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2006-11-18
Just like Xuxa's. Hee hee... which do you think is better? (I mean the games, not the poems.)
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| Healthy Obsession
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2006-11-18
It's not only very descriptive, it's one of the funniest haiku I've ever read (probably the funniest). Love it!
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| Wonder about Life
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2006-10-29
Wow... I can't believe you managed to make a poem out of "if life were a hot dog would you put ketchup on it." Good one though! :)
If life were a poem, would you give it a 5?
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| Your Eyes
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2006-10-14
This is great! Definitely one of your better poems. Only... I can't figure out which song it is. Is it the one from last year that we love so much (you know the one I mean)?
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| Blood-stained Ivory
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2006-10-04
Excellent poem! It flows beautifully and with great imagery.
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| Painful Jealousy
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2006-09-28
Whoa! Nice job Aaron-kun.
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| A New Morning (Part 2)
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2006-09-24
Excellent imagery.
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| Lament of a Young Child
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2006-09-16
Wow. Just.... wow.
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| Surreal Instance
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2006-09-13
You really have a talent for writing. Thanks for this one!
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| 9-11 now lies in heaven (A Tribute)
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2006-09-13
Wow... Very moving. You should save this for future generations.
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| Drowning
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2006-09-13
Wow, this is really good. Nice haiku Xuxa!
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| My Cause
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2006-08-21
Wow. This is incredible! It's such an interesting rhyme and rhythm scheme; it really makes your voice powerful. I love it!
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