Some may spot it; others won't. A haiku. ;-)


Healthy Obsession

Done with my off'ring,
Darkness floods my eyes, but I
Recall the arrows.




Haiku by Xuxa
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Written on 2006-11-09 at 05:16

Tags Fun  Obsession  Dancing 

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Wehpudicabok
It's not only very descriptive, it's one of the funniest haiku I've ever read (probably the funniest). Love it!
2006-11-18


Coolaaron88 The PoetBay support member heart!
Oh I see it now, D-D-R. You are so tricky : )

~Aaron Rowe
2006-11-13


Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
haiku is 5 7 5. this is a perfect count. The emotion and imagery is perfect as well.
2006-11-09


Coolaaron88 The PoetBay support member heart!
"off'ring" Sweet Move.: )

~Aaron Rowe
2006-11-09