Double-YOU Haiku Number TWO

I throw my whims to
The wind and watch them wither
Away wond'ring why...




Poetry by Xuxa
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Written on 2007-01-14 at 07:12

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Coolaaron88
Why not you always have extras... This poem was nice with the alliterations of the "w". The haiku theme fit in very well. I thought it was a very simple haiku alliteration. Good Job

~Aaron Rowe

Language: 4
Format: 5
Mood: 5
Overall: 5
2007-01-15


Coolaaron88
Why not you always have extras... This poem was nice with the alliterations of the "w". The haiku theme fit in very well. I thought it was a very simple haiku alliteration. Good Job

~Aaron Rowe

Language: 4
Format: 5
Mood: 5
Overall: 5
2007-01-15


Amanda K
that was lovely. good shot.
2007-01-14


Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
lovely images and "feel" to this haiku. Well done.
2007-01-14