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MIRZA AHMER BEG

36 years old


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Irritable

2024-05-18
The incompleteness of life is it's beauty


MAY NIGHT BY ANN WOOD

2024-05-18
The words are vivid ,I can relate to them clearly and yes only lovers of poetry can delve deeper in spiritual realities.


Twenty-six years without my Dad BY ANN WOOD

2024-05-18
Exactly the same feelings with me ,this July 14 it will be 7;years without my father and yes the grief gets deeper with time


I DO NOT LIKE BEING CALLED WHITE!

2024-05-16
God doesn't judge us by the colour of our skin ,before Lord we are all equal


One Day

2024-05-16
I feel poets sometimes like to disappear from cacophony ,,🙂nice one


Will you miss me?

2024-05-16
Thanks dear for taking time to read my work ,it's really encouraging .why do they work against you ,😁


UNIVERSAL RIGHT!

2024-03-30
Prophet Muhammed peace be upon him has taught me the same, to spread good and have patience over the trails that come in that way. To do good in these times when perhaps everyone is changing into a zombie of selfishness, spreading love becomes a challenge. Allah bless you ❤


YOU THINK EVEN BELIEVE

2024-03-14
a faith in divine ,question everything in that light,everything will fall in place


HOSPITAL DAYS - 1

2024-02-20
Get well soon! A beautiful write


Bobcats playing in the snow

2024-01-10
Beautiful imagery and distill innocence


i did not walk this afternoon

2023-12-28
Challenges of the questions that life puts forth and the answers we try to put forth, the most honest effort one can put


A SAD SIGHT (Additans)

2023-12-26
You are absolutely right we will get transformed into something else, this makes me remember always brave new world by aldous Huxley


Apples and canopies

2023-12-24
@sameen , no dear these are my original memories


happy dance

2023-12-12
A unique taste , a catharsis a passion one likes, well written


tanka

2023-12-12
Has a tasty flavor like warm lemon tea ☕


Deep in winter

2023-12-10
Thanks my dear friends for taking time to read and appreciate my humble works, it's really fortunate that if my work is illuminating and may be the lone Star might have been a satellite 😊but it still loves me!


a second is not a day, my love

2023-11-20
this yearning is not without a reason ,life needs a strong philosophy to abide by and then get answers to the questions we have .These philosophies one may get in prophet jesus ,prophet muhammad (peace be upon them both) or anywhere else.Its your soul that finally decides


Celestial dust

2023-11-16
Thanks for taking time to read my humble work


Rains and night duty

2023-11-10
Thanks sameen for delving deep into it


scare crow

2023-10-20
Thanks dear for taking time to read my humble piece


I heard the silence

2023-06-30
Thanks a lot for your honest feedback!


Your untrue eyes

2023-04-15
thanks my dear friend for beautifully summing it up


Night that dark is

2023-04-13
Yes may be poet's hearts feel alike, thanks for your wishes and relating to the words I wrote.


IT'S RAINING IT'S POURING DOWN

2023-04-10
Keep lighting the world with your beautiful work


OUR COUSINS

2023-04-10
We humans were created to take care of others, what did we do ? Plunder and made the world captive...... Well written and hits home


cat

2023-04-07
although the essence to convey was very difficult but am very happy that the message has gone home ,thanks both of you for encouraging me with exactly the words that decipher real meaning from my work


Brush Strokes

2023-03-25
that"s very close how it appears in the mind of an artist when he or she is trying to get that image on canvas although seemingly difficult to get there yet magic happens!


All the Legends

2023-02-09
The sun ate the day and swallowed the moon ' beautiful lines


MY AVATAR

2023-01-31
a beautiful question to ask
we as the drop from immense ocean of God's love will go back to it ,i believe completely


Snows like a fairy land

2023-01-26
Thanks for taking a while to write something for my effort, nostalgia is always a part of us but it mostly belongs to those who have a heart that feels and is empathic


January winter night

2023-01-23
Thanks my friend, this poem came right from my soul


The bleeding heart of pious sentimentality

2022-10-02
very piercing piece into the deep psychology of emotions ,beautifully written interlinking human emotions attached with things and memories .It honestly brings tears for a caring heart .keep writing .


Have My Honey

2022-09-26
The very nature of fragile human love and changing people


my old friend autumn

2022-09-06
Thanks all, for your wishes, prayers and encouragement.


shadows on the wall

2022-08-29
Thank you for those beautiful words of encouragement


The little spider

2022-08-26
a beautiful correlation between spider and poetry of life,keep up the great work


End of the Setting Sun

2011-10-06
Opening lines are so pictuersque ,marvellous.keep it up


My heart

2011-10-02
Indeed an innocent writing!keep it up


Feel Alive

2010-08-02
beautiful work!emotions presented in original form to a great extent ,keep it up!


Whispers in the Mountains

2009-11-24
rightly said and skillfully explained , very subtle title to deal but done well!!!


Band Camp

2009-09-05
this is incessant struggle with human impulses, the greatest battle and the highest peak has to be achieved within ones own self, hope high ............good work


Licensed

2008-11-04
nice work ,the idea in itself presents a human impulse........keep it up


Poetry. Dreams and imagination

2008-07-04
asalamualikum,a magnificient blend of words and thoughts giving rise to imagination that has been imagined...keep it up


The lonely shadow.

2007-08-29
hi ,the poem is nice worth admiration,but in my opinion you should have avoided the line of mouse in the end for it disturbs the rythym of emotions...rest i say carry on you are doing well


FAREWELL

2006-10-18
carry on its marvellous