| a second is not a day, my love
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2023-11-20
this yearning is not without a reason ,life needs a strong philosophy to abide by and then get answers to the questions we have .These philosophies one may get in prophet jesus ,prophet muhammad (peace be upon them both) or anywhere else.Its your soul that finally decides
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| Celestial dust
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2023-11-16
Thanks for taking time to read my humble work
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| Rains and night duty
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2023-11-10
Thanks sameen for delving deep into it
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| My father's house
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2023-11-09
The most close one can be to a storm of emotions , only those can understand who have been through it. Superb writing
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| scare crow
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2023-10-20
Thanks dear for taking time to read my humble piece
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| She grabs her shoes and sneaks away
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2023-06-30
Complex battle of soul amidst right and wrong brought forth beautifully for only Lord can hide our sins and forgive....
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| I heard the silence
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2023-06-30
Thanks a lot for your honest feedback!
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| Your untrue eyes
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2023-04-15
thanks my dear friend for beautifully summing it up
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| Night that dark is
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2023-04-13
Yes may be poet's hearts feel alike, thanks for your wishes and relating to the words I wrote.
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| IT'S RAINING IT'S PORING DOWN
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2023-04-10
Keep lighting the world with your beautiful work
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| OUR COUSINS
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2023-04-10
We humans were created to take care of others, what did we do ? Plunder and made the world captive...... Well written and hits home
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| cat
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2023-04-07
although the essence to convey was very difficult but am very happy that the message has gone home ,thanks both of you for encouraging me with exactly the words that decipher real meaning from my work
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| Brush Strokes
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2023-03-25
that"s very close how it appears in the mind of an artist when he or she is trying to get that image on canvas although seemingly difficult to get there yet magic happens!
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| All the Legends
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2023-02-09
The sun ate the day and swallowed the moon ' beautiful lines
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| MY AVATAR
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2023-01-31
a beautiful question to ask
we as the drop from immense ocean of God's love will go back to it ,i believe completely
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| Snows like a fairy land
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2023-01-26
Thanks for taking a while to write something for my effort, nostalgia is always a part of us but it mostly belongs to those who have a heart that feels and is empathic
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| January winter night
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2023-01-23
Thanks my friend, this poem came right from my soul
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| The bleeding heart of pious sentimentality
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2022-10-02
very piercing piece into the deep psychology of emotions ,beautifully written interlinking human emotions attached with things and memories .It honestly brings tears for a caring heart .keep writing .
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| Have My Honey
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2022-09-26
The very nature of fragile human love and changing people
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| my old friend autumn
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2022-09-06
Thanks all, for your wishes, prayers and encouragement.
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| shadows on the wall
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2022-08-29
Thank you for those beautiful words of encouragement
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| The little spider
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2022-08-26
a beautiful correlation between spider and poetry of life,keep up the great work
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| End of the Setting Sun
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2011-10-06
Opening lines are so pictuersque ,marvellous.keep it up
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| My heart
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2011-10-02
Indeed an innocent writing!keep it up
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| Feel Alive
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2010-08-02
beautiful work!emotions presented in original form to a great extent ,keep it up!
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| Whispers in the Mountains
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2009-11-24
rightly said and skillfully explained , very subtle title to deal but done well!!!
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| Band Camp
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2009-09-05
this is incessant struggle with human impulses, the greatest battle and the highest peak has to be achieved within ones own self, hope high ............good work
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| Licensed
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2008-11-04
nice work ,the idea in itself presents a human impulse........keep it up
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| Poetry. Dreams and imagination
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2008-07-04
asalamualikum,a magnificient blend of words and thoughts giving rise to imagination that has been imagined...keep it up
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| The lonely shadow.
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2007-08-29
hi ,the poem is nice worth admiration,but in my opinion you should have avoided the line of mouse in the end for it disturbs the rythym of emotions...rest i say carry on you are doing well
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| FAREWELL
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2006-10-18
carry on its marvellous
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