| White Nights
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2007-10-20
Zoya, you are such a romantic. I love reading your work.
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| the coulor white
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2007-10-20
Kath...you have captured the pain of losing someone when they know they should be together. Very good read.
Hugs
Rob
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| Halls of Longing
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2007-10-20
kathy, everyone should have that feeling once in their life. Very good read.
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| When Was I Ever Beautiful?
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2007-10-17
Beautiful and oh so true!
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| Forbidden remedy
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2007-10-06
Unique thoughts. I loved it!
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| Rosa Romanova
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2007-10-05
Zoya, your best yet. I loved it
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| colors (haiku)
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2007-10-05
Interesting and beautiful imagery
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| There is a shadow
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2007-10-05
Very interesting...makes you think and wonder, GOOD JOB!
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| The hippie culture
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2007-10-05
I was a semi hippie and you showed what it was truly like. GOOD JOB!
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| Twilight Serenity
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2007-10-05
Kathy, there is no one like you...thank the gods for you. You are a genius when it comes to imagery!
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| If My Breath Were You
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2007-10-05
Kathy my friend, you have got to be the most romantic woman I know! Beautiful job...as usual!
Hugs
Rob
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| Wrapped in cellophane
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2007-10-05
Only one word speaks of this work.....beautiful!
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| A Journey to Love
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2007-09-21
Kathy, my friend, that truly shows the path we all take trying to find the right one! I tried the Ouija once and it told me that i would marry the one girl in my HS that I would not touch if my life depended on it. At the time I was very much in love with her sister. :)
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| Oh, For The Good Old Days
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2007-04-22
I don't know about your house but we cooked with lard and bacon grease when I was growing up and we had fatty meat with every supper....
It was a gret piece but not my memory of food from the 60s and we did have Mc Donald's when I was a kid :)
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| Behind the Veil
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2007-04-22
This is the first piece of yours that I have read and I am still in shock. With lines like, "In all the noise, I cannot hear my voice
and only taste my silent scream as tattered echoes of this shattered dream pollute my bloodstream with their sickly poison" I had to read it three times to get my senses back from the edge. This is truly a piece of art!
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| Fairy-Fly
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2007-04-22
I seriously wish I could do that style of poetry. I loved it. Tight imagery. Good piece!
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| Legacy of History
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2007-04-22
I know ytou wrote this as a poem but I think it is more of almost a prayer. It is very spiritual and strong. Keep up the good work!
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| O Kumquat, Coconut, Raisin and Peach
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2007-04-22
I loved your poem...it made me really hungry! But you have to tell me...what in the heck is a Kumquat????? Actually I think with the items you had , if you added some 155 rum, it would make a really good drink!
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| Barbie
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2007-04-18
I honestly hope that you do not believe this. There are too many girls who are conned into starving, killing themselves to look like a toy. This piece hit me. Very good work!
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| Fantasy
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2007-04-18
Very romantic. I love the emotion that you brought to the piece.
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| It Only Takes A Drop
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2007-04-18
My daughter was at the shootings in Edinboro P and she told stories of horror. You hit it right on the head...you are the best
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| His Gifts
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2007-04-18
Very romantic....if this is true you are a very lucky woman
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| Between the Breaths
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2007-04-10
only one word fit....WOW! I loved it
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| these words
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2007-04-07
Imagery was great...I saw everything in my mind.
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| English is Easy???
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2007-03-31
This is fantastic!!!!! It has got to be one of the funniest pieces i have seen.
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| FEAR (acrostic)
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2007-03-31
It is amazing how a few words can draw such emotion. I loved it!
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| Claw The Hearts
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2007-03-25
Very interesting. I has so many images running though my mind!
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| Ten Thousand Flowers Wilted and Scorched
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2007-03-20
I loved it my friend...you are so talented
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| The Signature of Our Souls
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2007-03-07
caught my imagination. I saw everything you wrote in my mind. I love your talent!
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| I'm Sorry..
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2007-03-07
I would say I am sorry but you'd probably hit me. I loved it. I really did not see the ending coming.
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| Time- A question of Perception
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2007-03-07
I agree with everything you wrote. I get caught in "time warps" all of the time where minutes to me are really hours in real time. I loved it!
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| closed doors
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2007-03-07
Very interesting images....it took me a couple of seconds but I got it!
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| WORDS FOR WORD LOVERS
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2007-03-07
That has got to be the funniest thing I have read in a long time....thanks for the smile
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| The 14th
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2007-02-23
Very interesting look at a romantic day. I love it!
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| You Are My Sunshine
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2007-02-23
My Father sang me that song when I was 5....sooooo many years ago. Thank for the memories
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| A Mountain Awareness
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2007-02-23
This gets the point across very well...especially with all the pseudo-celebrities around now a days
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| When Love...
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2007-02-18
My friend, you are one of the most romantic people I know. I love reading your work. I bookmarked this one
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| Some comedy
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2007-02-15
Interesting outlook on a classic piece! You always wonder what would happen if yiou took one door rather than the other....you just showed us
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| WORDS
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2007-02-14
There are two universes..."reality" and "cyber". Which is real and what is our fantasy....we'll never know.
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| Please don't spank my. . .
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2007-02-14
Interesting my friend, most interesting
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| Beware of
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2007-02-14
I have NEVER felt pure anger like I did from this piece. It was pure emotion! Good work!
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| Half an Ode to Half a Loaf
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2007-02-09
I will never look at a loaf of bread the same way again. I have a question....can you write anything that isn't good and very intriguing?
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| returns again
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2007-02-07
Love is full of everlasting circles...I love it!
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| There was a young lady from Norway
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2007-02-07
It is truly great to see someone of your generation still with a sense of humour! That style of poetry will never die but we have forgotten how to write it....THANK YOU!
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| Words Incinerated Upon Re-entry
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2007-02-07
I loved it .... good imagery. You have more talent that you could ever possibly use but I do have a question...what the heck is a "dark sunlit night"???
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| Nocturne
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2007-02-01
you have a way with words that strikes deep into the human heart. I love every word that you write
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| Bloomsbury
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2007-01-23
Very good imagery. I do have one question....where did this take place....France or England?
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| silence
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2007-01-23
Very nice piece. I loved the flow of it
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| so ...
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2007-01-23
Kath, I would love to really know your heart. If your writing can show so much love....what you have inside you must be enouigh love to light the world.
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| Cabin Fever
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2007-01-22
Romance in it purest form! made me remember an old girlfriend and the times we spent together deep in the woods
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from USA 