| Souls
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2006-12-04
There are times when we can't be alone,i know this to be so ,so true...10
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| Depression
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2006-11-30
I cut myself deeply,i know this well,being bipoler i get to go throw the ups and downs,and then to top it off,no sleep,,its not really your point in your poem ,but for me its all moods,,happy or sad,the poem is good,,i give it a ten...
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| This Rock, My Rock
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2006-11-26
But something has changed,i think its great to get this,,and think ,when did it happen,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,8
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| Forever in Wait
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2006-11-26
Nor can I think
as to what was my sin,i can see this............10
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| Late for Love
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2006-11-26
Nor can I think
as to what was my sin,great line...........................10
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| Flesh
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2006-11-26
wolves ,there are many.....................................10
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| Run...
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2006-11-26
My whole existence
Seems to me an alien,i know this feeling,10
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| Calm Endings
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2006-11-19
What did you replace,makes the poem...10
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| Crescendo Quickly
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2006-11-19
great poem,,as a g uiter player,i know that music when your alone is like taking drugs ,,,10
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| Coming Out of The Darkness
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2006-11-11
Have guided me back into the sun,makes the poem,,,10
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| Broken
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2006-11-09
love ,when its taken away ,,,it hurts
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| Earth an entry to the element challenge of Aliena and Zoya
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2006-11-08
so simple ,yet very powerfull,,,,10
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| Disappear ~Response to A.N's Haunted Eyes Poem~
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2006-11-08
You always will be a piece of art,makes the poem,,,,,10
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| Seraphs Will Come
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2006-11-08
like the idea,the only thing i can say is it could be shorter,more of a punch....
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