| SPIRALLING
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2025-06-09
Very clever Alan.
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| Feels Like it's All That's Left
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2025-05-01
Hope is not morbid my friend. I know you and you are strong. Look at everything you have achieved. Give yourself a break and take one day at a time. Hugs.
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| THE CRYSTAL'S IN MY EARS
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2025-03-22
That must be horrible. My wife has a similar inner ear problem and has to do an exercise where she sits and flops down on the bed sideways to reposition the crystals. She also has tablets that help. I hope you feel better soon.
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| Yellow Sweetheart Roses
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2025-03-21
A beautiful remembrance. "I am your wave you are my shore" is a wonderful line.
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| in the tocking of a tick
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2025-03-15
Thought provoking. I like the format.
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| Well-being in alive seeing
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2025-03-13
I agree with Shells. Your work always contains sound logic and often welcomed tranquility.
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| deja brew
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2025-03-11
Deep. Someone you are hooking up with again after drinking?
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| Reflections II
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2025-03-09
Yes, you did get there. They say that those who go from rich to poor feel it a lot more than just being poor. You should be so proud of your achievements and of your poetic ability.
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| The Wax and the Stamp
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2025-03-08
Interesting metaphor about the problem. Wax on, wax off. :)
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| silent craters
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2025-03-08
It is indeed strange and intriguing. Buzz Aldrin called it a "Magnificent Desolation". Who knows what our bodies have been part of in the past. Can you see the planets as well with your telescope?
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| Afterlife
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2025-03-04
Ha ha. She got you with that one. Nicely done.
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| The Devil Walked Out
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2025-02-28
Interesting indeed. Absolute truths are unchangeable, but people are not.
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| feasibility of lifelong friendships
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2025-02-27
So true. I like the term "puppy dog alliances" in reference to early friendships.
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| Old MacIntosh
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2025-02-27
Very clever :)
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| ON THE OUT SIDE (Additans)
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2025-02-26
That's how it goes my friend. Happy Birthday!
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| BROUHAHAHA
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2025-02-15
That's life all around you Ken.
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| BEACON OF LIGHT
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2025-02-15
Nice one Alan.
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| Kali Yuga 2025
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2025-02-14
Well done indeed! Lies seem to have become the only currency (as you write). It is amazing how even thickly veiled metaphoric work has an obvious target these days.
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| MOTHERS ADVICE BY ANN WOOD
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2025-02-09
Great advice for these overcomplicated times. Bravo.
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| MAN IT'S SO COLD OUT THERE!
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2025-02-08
Pommie weather strikes again Ken. Michilin Man made me smile.
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| DESOLATION OF WAR
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2025-02-07
An apocalyptical tale. Well done Alan.
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| Hey handsome
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2025-02-07
How did you know all this without knowing me? I am blushing now.
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| Vashedan-Vehnan
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2025-02-07
Love, the eternal tragedy.
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| Weather in love
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2025-02-07
Interesting title. We should all love ourselves a bit more.
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| WHAT IF THIS IS MAN'S UNIVERSAL EQUATION
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2025-02-04
Yes, we might take our problems with us across the galaxy. Interesting thoughts Alan.
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| peanut seller
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2025-02-04
You have a poet's eye for seeing the story and you tell it well.
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| DREAMS BY ANN WOOD
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2025-02-03
How wonderful. You play with words so well.
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| Medium
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2025-02-03
Beautiful. You describe the feeling so well.
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| V
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2025-02-02
I agree with Shells. I love the dichotomy of the ending.
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| The horrors
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2025-02-01
Interesting thought. Universal equations maybe.
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| TO OPINE OR NOT TO OPINE?
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2025-02-01
First they came for......
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| BEST TO READ OF THE PAST
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2025-02-01
We are creatures with short memoroes Ken.
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| Midnight Close
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2025-01-29
So beautiful.
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| A truth
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2025-01-29
Sometimes love is more complicated with close relatives than with others. Like Allen I had to read this a few times. It involves deep feelings and personal interactions.
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| I forgive her
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2025-01-29
A very personal piece. Family dynamics are always complicated. It is freeing to be forgiving.
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| Let the pigeons fly
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2025-01-29
How intriguing and well crafted.
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| MY MIND WON'T LET ME SLEEP
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2025-01-28
Nice poem. My wife is an insomniac so I know about this. Me, I just take my meds and eventually drop off.
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| SAYING THE WRONG THING 2
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2025-01-25
You did it again Alan. :)
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| I WONT BE GONE
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2025-01-25
I hope not Ken. Wishing you well my friend.
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| SAYING THE WRONG THING
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2025-01-25
You gave me a laugh for the day. :)
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| DARKNESS DESCENDS UPON MY MIND
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2025-01-24
You have your own style. That is much more important in my opinion than just spelling correctly.
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| Pearls of wisdom
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2025-01-24
Very clever Alan.
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| THE POETICVERSE
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2025-01-21
Nicely done.
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| BABINDEN BY ANN WOOD
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2025-01-21
What an interesting custom.
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| I MISS YOU BY ANN WOOD
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2025-01-20
So sad and beautiful.
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| LIVEING SPASE (Relavant Additans)
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2025-01-20
As long as there are boundaries, there are disgruntled people.
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| Winter Went
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2025-01-20
So nice.
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| Feeling down
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2025-01-20
I enjoyed reading this. I liked the "It tasted of a life,
That I'd thrown away."
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| Staying Home
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2025-01-20
Nicely done. Lockdown was pretty much the same life for me.
Although the panic and stress of the world was sad to see.
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| A universal star of love
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2025-01-20
A beautiful piece of work.
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from Australia