Lea Foverskov

2008-12-04
So beautiful and so true - it inspired me. Thank you!

2008-05-18
Jeg elsker norsk! I'm Danish, and I love the Norwegian language - maybe translate it with

"Love consists of...
you and me."

But yes, so true, so short, sweet, and beautiful!

-Lea

2008-04-12
Oh my, this is great! Back to basics, remembering what this is all about! Keep writing!!

-Lea

2008-04-01
OMG! This is depressing, so sad, and also beautiful. Romeo and Juliet all over in a modern version!

-Lea

2008-04-01
Oh I'll hate the player once in a while, for you can love the game in spite of the player! But a good point! :)

-Lea

2008-04-01
Oh my God, this took my breath away! Beautiful!

-Lea

2008-04-01
The way you connect the lines and you own thoughts is wonderful!

-Lea

2008-04-01
Oh, isn't this what all of us think about our own deaths? Bookmarked!

-Lea

2008-04-01
Short and sweet!

-Lea

2008-04-01
You're saying what everybody is thinking in such a short and succinct manner, I'm amazed!

-Lea

2008-04-01
Beautiful! (I'm shortening down my comments in an attempt to imitate you :)

-Lea

2008-04-01
I agree with everyone else! :) Beautiful, short write. You say such amazing things with so few words!

-Lea

2008-04-01
In so few words you say exactly what you think, precisely. Sad, beautiful, simple, and to the point. Thanks!

-Lea

2008-04-01
Oh man, such a powerful expression in so few words! Great write!

-Lea

2008-04-01
Thanks for the great and interesting biography. Your keen interest in this writer and his themes shine through in your text, and really reminds me that I have to read some of his works (ashamed, I must admit I have never read anything of London...)! Thanks for the inspiration!

-Lea

2008-03-31
I loved the point of view of this one, Mike, really great way of turning the tables on the reader!

-Lea

2008-03-31
Personally, I love hats and although my head (and esp. my hair) is not well suited for wearing one, I enjoy seeing hats on other people's heads. Esp. the fedora on Bogart! Great write about a culture that will hopefully soon be back!

2008-03-30
Just to comment on Rob and clear off any misunderstandings, I wrote it, but have no recollection of doing so! :)

2008-03-29
Beautiful, romantic, and it is clear that you are receving divine inspiration!

-Lea

2008-03-29
Beautiful and simple! So down to earth in its celebration of your love. Wonderful!

-Lea

2007-11-11
wow, and what passion you feel for art and this artist! not only is it great to be informed, but not unlike rob, you enjoy teaching, sharing the passion, and i love to be at the receiving end! keep them coming!

-Lea

2007-11-11
i like this! really refreshing way of putting things! words can be so deceitful.

-Lea

2007-11-11
great poem on how love changes us all!

-Lea

2007-11-03
beautiful text guys! i loved the way you were writing independently in the beginning, different verses etc., and then combine your writing. i think the last verse could have taken a little more 'we' rather than 'I', 'him', 'her' - but that's just me! yet another beautiful co-write.

-Lea

2007-11-02
wonderful ode to your love! it makes the rest of us swoon... :)

-Lea

2007-11-02
wonderful! great description of the place, the audience, the fight itself. i didn't just feel i was there, i felt like i was in the ring. great work!

-Lea

2007-10-27
humorous, and yet with a serious note to it (i know you didn't want this to be serious, but time is nevertheless an important and serious topic! :) great!

-Lea

2007-10-27
this is truly wonderful! lovely rhymes and flow to it, and a sad love story. it has it all!

-Lea

2007-10-27
it seems like much more than a game! i like the analysis of love, in its different forms and shapes - and the metaphor of water and the sea is great. nice piece!

-Lea

2007-10-27
this is a wonderful poem, great play with words, and exploration of the human nature. it has a good flow to it. a great reminder to us all!

-Lea

2007-10-26
wonderful text, mike, always good to see your love! it keeps up my hopes.

-Lea

2007-10-26
this poem goes esp. wonderfully with kathy's comment and i'd say 'answer' to your poem. wonderful exchange of feelings!

-Lea

2007-10-26
i LOVED this!!! amazing stuff! truly fantastic rob! i was struggling to get through it, to understand the i's that were gone, and suddenly my face lit up in a smile as i realized your mission. great work!!!

-Lea

2007-10-26
delightful text! wonderful expression of the immediate desire in a mere look. great work!

-Lea

2007-10-21
Wonderful poem - like Kathy wrote, it creates images in one's mind, different beautiful images. Although I hate singling out verses from a poem that's a whole, I did especially enjoy this one:
"Shining ray
Reflect light off the dull blades
Of the petals of bouquets
Bounce back to my crowd"
Thanks!

-Lea

2007-10-21
i found myself reading this out loud with a rhythm that just flowed smoothly ahead. i've always wanted a litte brother - i envy you your love!

-Lea

2007-10-21
agree with the other comments here - but would also like to say that i admire the play between the beautiful young woman and the gory blood spilling in the arena. opposites somehow, but brought together for this display in the afternoon. great piece!

-Lea

2007-10-20
being able to talk and write about it is an important step. a truly great poem for expressing the feelings that you felt.

-Lea

2007-10-20
wow, what a breathtaking and beautiful piece on the beauties, wonders and workings of nature. a great delight to read, with its flow and rhymes. it reminds me of Tolkien.

-Lea

2007-10-20
what an extremely sad, but good and true poem. it is so important to be aware of this dreadful disease, and writing and talking about contributes to this. so an important poem, but also good in its poetry - there is a flow and rhythm over it, occasionally punctuated, that i enjoy. great piece!

-Lea

2007-10-20
a very true write, and i can really relate to this feeling. if you can't be yourself with another person, then you shouldn't be around that person. good write!

-Lea

2007-10-18
oh this is wonderful! so romantic and beautiful. however much my young romantic ideals of how love should work influence me, this still leaves me breathless.

-Lea

2007-10-18
wonderful, short, beautiful poem. it reminded me much of lastromantichero's recent poem: "As of a rose" - check it out!

-Lea

2007-10-18
getting to know other people is a long and complicated process. great metaphor - glass and a person. nice read!

-Lea

2007-10-18
this is a beautiful and real way to relate your life story! a wonderful read, and inspite of its sadness still so uplifting and full of hope.
"I remembered papa saying, "We are the salt of the earth. "
and I answered him back smiling, "By virtue of birth."
There lines in our hands of our fate so they say.
But I know that a man is the master of all;
For he makes his own footsteps,
His night or his day
And he wishes his rising and causes his fall."
BEAUTIFUL! and so true!

-Lea

2007-10-18
some people remain for a lifetime, others don't. great piece!

-Lea

2007-10-18
beautiful and so true. thank you for saying and reminding us of these things!

-Lea

2007-10-18
beautiful, romantic and lovely to read!

-Lea

2007-10-13
great write. questioning identity, feelings, looks, relationships, emotions... lots of themes, lots of questions. in rob's words, a 'sharp' read!

-Lea

2007-10-13
i like this rambling text of images and words and feelings. because although it rambles it still sticks to a point (which is often where i fail). one is left not quite sure how to feel, and perhaps a litlle emotionally tired from all the impressions. great work!

-Lea