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Dee Daffodil

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Christmas Wish

2010-12-17
Sometimes the greatest gift we can give at Christmas, is that of sharing ourselves with people who love us. It's not easy to please everyone at once, in fact...it's next to impossible. Although your heart is blue for that one TRUE love...take comfort in the fact that you have warmed the hearts of those who have hung the stockings. :-)
Merry Christmas.
Hugs,
Dee


Red Hats in an Organ Loft

2010-12-17
What ??? Is there something wrong with NOT wearing knickers ??? LOL

Nice writing Elle !
Hugs,
Dee


Shhhhh.....

2010-12-03
Wow !!! This is lovely !! I just love the way it flows so nicely. :-)
Hugs,
Dee


...On the onset of white stuff

2010-11-27
Ahhh yes...things are indeed looking white out there ! :-) I do believe I smell Christmas in the air...

Hugs,
Dee


Last Ferryboat

2010-11-11
I love the lines...Twilight remembers...All the offenders...

There's a price to pay for everything we do...sometimes, if we're lucky...we get a second chance.
Nicely written.
Hugs,
Dee


For a Coat Pocket

2010-11-11
Beautiful piece of truthful poetry. :-)

Hugs,
dee


Plastic Poppies

2010-11-11
Kudos to you for saying it as it is.
Hugs,
Dee


Carried Away

2010-10-22
One wonders...is love supposed to be cautious...careful...well thought out? No...I think not. Love...no matter how short...is meant to be that whirlwind that you have described.
Hugs,
Dee


The Girl

2010-10-19
Adorable! I have seen myself in this poem, and I have seem one of my daughters in this as well. To those who march to the beat of their own drums, I say...go forth and conquer !! :-)

Hugs,
Dee


Stagnation

2010-10-19
Surely one who writes such fine poetry cannot be stagnating? Nicely done...enjoyable read about where I have found myself, upon occasion, lately.

Hugs.
Dee


The Wake

2010-10-19
Wow...You write this as though you are watching it all unfurl before your eyes. Kudos to you for packing so much emotion and intensity into so few words !!
Hugs,
Dee


Street Child

2010-10-19
A very impressive poem. :-) I love the last line. It's awful when kids are forced to grow up too fast...and yet...it's far too common in some areas. :-(
Great topic to ponder.

Hugs,
Dee


Today Was Beautiful

2010-09-30
LOL...I think the comment by you before your poem was precious and says it all. :-) It could have been awful, but it wasn't...and you savoured every minute of it. :-) Nice writing !
hugs,
Dee


Twenty years

2010-09-17
What a beautiful, yet poignant love story...two people who were so close...and yet so far.
Nice poetry!
Hugs,
Dee


Bloom.

2010-05-27
Wowza !!

Hugs,
Dee


Love living, living love.

2010-05-27
Wow !! What a beautiful portrayal of love and life. Lovely !!
Hugs,
Dee


I Saw Her In The Shopping Mall

2010-05-04
Don't you hate it when that happens ??! LOL I usually find that "Well hello Dahling !! You look absolutely magnificent !! Works quite well. Chances are they haven't a clue what your name is either !! LOL
Hugs,
Dee


Steak Pie

2010-05-04
LOL...Clever once again ! I love your ability to spin a story into a pun.
Hugs,
Dee


With apologies to Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

2010-05-04
LOL ! Love this one. Who knew that you could rhyme Alopecia with teacher ??!! LOL Very cool piece of poetry !1 Fun stuff to read !
Hugs,
dee


Grandpa's Ashes

2010-05-04
LOL....Clever piece of poetry. Very witty.
Hugs,
Dee


Fairy Feet

2010-05-03
Wow !! Love the surprise ending !!! Isn't it great that we can each escape our reality from time to time, if only for a brief moment ? :-) Nice writing !
Hugs,
Dee


Ghost on a Lonely Lane

2010-02-25
Wow !! What a wonderfully crafted piece. You have such a vivid imagination. :-) Thank you for sharing it with us. :-)

Hugs,
Dee


A Warning to the Curious

2010-02-17
Ohhh how the forbidden intrigues us ! :-) Wonderful piece ! A great Halloween poem !! :-)
Hugs,
Dee


The Haunted Wood

2010-02-17
Lovely ! :-)
Hugs,
Dee


I Give Up!

2010-01-27
Hey !! Good for you !!! You only think they're your friends...but they aren't. Very crearive...very enjoyable !
Hugs,
Dee


Before it's Too Late

2010-01-27
This one is too close to home for me. I lost a friend two weeks ago, and hadn't had the chance to say goodbye... Regrets? Oh yes...there were a few.

Hugs,
Dee


I know you, you know me..

2010-01-16
I love the line..."I will dance on the light of the moon"...beautiful !
Hugs,
Dee


Barnacles

2010-01-16
This is fantastic ! I can actually see those poor lost souls on this sunken ship. Geat work!
Hugs,
Dee


This Poem Is Kind Of Silly

2009-11-25
Sometimes...."silly" is a very good place to be !! :-) I like it !
Hugs,
Dee


WHEN WORDS ARE NOT READ

2009-09-23
I never thought of it that way before ! Enjoyable !
Hugs,
Dee


FORGIVENESS

2009-09-23
I really liked this poem. Although it may have been of a personal nature, you dared share it with the world. There are steps along the path to healing and the first is probably realizing that the drinking was in no way YOUR fault. Each of us controls our destiny to some extent. I'm sorry for your loss, sorry for your grief. Well written.
Hugs,
Dee


A feather on your pillow ( a cowrite by NSW + Kathy Lockhart)

2009-09-09
Lovely piece that the two of you have written together ! Nicely done!
Hugs,
Dee


Not Catching You

2009-08-23
Bittersweet....and lovely !! A very touching piece that I can find bits of myself in.
Hugs,
Dee


It's In Their Eyes

2009-08-23
A very pretty piece of poetry. A gold star well deserved ! :-)

hugs,
Dee


Welcome

2009-06-26
Oh sure...ya talk tough !! :-) I've glimpsed at most of your poems and notice a common theme... Intriguing poetry you write !
Hugs,
Dee


If I Could Write Like

2009-06-10
Please do...keep writing...just like you !! :-) Your poems are awesome !
Hugs,
Dee


Sleepwalking

2009-06-01
Elle,
Great poem. I think I lost almost a whole year in limbo...even still I find myself with moments of being off in my own little world, and not fully grounded to reality just yet. They tell me that eventually you find yourself again. :-)
Hugs,
Dee


Rwanda's Rue

2009-05-22
Horror and anguish relived each and every day... I like the smooth flowing style of this poem.
Hugs,
Dee


Faithfool

2009-05-22
The waiting to hear that voice can be painful...exhausting. Then...just when you thought that all hope was lost and even the memory of the voice had faded...there it is.... And you die all over again, with the anguish and knowledge that you never really ever had that bvoice in the first place...

Awesome piece !

hugs,
dee


I Close My Door

2009-05-22
On those days when you are battle weary, I hope you find that inner strength to sooth your soul, regain your focus and continue on. You write very well and have a ton of talent, so please rest up for those battles (whatever they may be...), and continue writing with us.

Hugs,
Dee


First Star to the Right

2009-05-22
A lovely piece. You paint the picture well, and I call almost see him sitting in his swing...waiting for that day when they will reunite. Nicely done.

Hugs,
Dee


Perfect For Me...

2009-05-14
An emotionally difficult piece to write I think... As always...well done !
Hugs,
Dee


My Cleaning Lady

2009-04-30
Perhaps you could send her my way... LOL My family is in need of tuning up...and unfortunately...they ignore me... :-)
Hugs,
Dee


Killing Kiln Time!

2009-04-16
This sounds like lots of fun. If you created the pendant above your poem....it's beautiful !! :-)
Hugs,
Dee


Ode to facebook.

2009-04-03
LOL...I don't know how I missed this superb piece before... Awesome !! It says it all ! I, use mine to show of family and vacation pics, to keep in touch with buddies far and near, and to while away the hours playing Lexulous or Chess, or perhaps the occasional jigsaw puzzle. Facebook is great, as long as we view it as entertainment. :-) Nicely written, loved the sense of humour !
Hugs,
dee


Your Not a Hero

2009-03-10
This poem makes me wonder why you thought at one time that this person WAS a hero. Often we form images in our mind's eye, of the people we want to have around us. Sometimes they're family, sometimes they are friends, sometimes people we haven't even met yet. When reality confronts us, and causes us to question the images we have formed, it can be a painful process to accept. It doesn't mean that those people are any less great, they are just different from what we grew to expect of them. :-)
Hugs,
Dee


She Was Lightening, Then She Was Sunshine

2009-03-10
Brilliant words ! Life IS too short to be spent on not living !! Excellent words from a wonderful 14 year old poet !! Bravo!
Hugs,
Dee


Wishes

2009-03-10
I would wish that we all had soul mates...Just waiting for us to arrive.
Wow...for fourteen you sure are brilliant. I can't tell you how many times mnay of my thoughts have echoed your poem. You write very well. You say it like it is, you sepak your mind, and should be congratulated for that !! Great work ! Keep writing !
Hugs,
Dee


Bikini Bowling

2009-03-09
LOL ! Yikes ! I can just picture this funny scene ! :-) Cute poem !
Hugs,
Dee


The Large Square Peg In The Little Round Hole

2009-03-05
Bravo !! Excellent piece ! A similar dilemma is where a teacher refers to the "gifted kids" in the class, thuis making all others by default, feel not terribly brilliant at all...sad...but true. Teachers need to realize that each person carries in their DNA, different strengths and weaknesses. If only teachers could actually spend the time to build on those individual strengths of students ! :-)
Hugs,
Dee