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Constant

2020-05-22
it has a kind of psalmodic rhythm...fateful.


Song Without Words

2020-05-20
i love the last stanza, how you let it unfold is very pleasant and brings a sense of relief


In the Suburbs

2020-05-18
I can't believe reality you describe is the same as film series...


Gods

2020-05-13
if you don't believe in something before nothing, how can something comes out of nothing?


For the PoetBay Poets

2020-05-12
my favorite part:"and holds
Workshops for the orthodox"
it looks like you've experimented it
I love the unusual information, brings fresh points of view...


Son visit his mom in nursing home by Ann Wood

2020-05-12
she gave him a good hint, a good lesson...maybe the son can still sort it out? who knows?


Figure of Speech, My Ass!

2020-05-12
short and straight, efficient and poetic


My Mistake

2020-05-12
yes, but I wouldn't make it an every time truth neither


IS IT WRONG TO MOCK? (A Stanza Added)

2020-05-12
mean people hurt, they don't mock


Francis Fukuyama was a Dope

2020-05-06
just think Lawrence, maybe you would have been a good communist, who knows, with other values and a faith stronger because you had little to grasp...I am surprised how the europeans see the usa still as a place where it is possible to succeed, a man remains a man, it's not the system that will change him


Francis Fukuyama was a Dope

2020-05-06
someone has to said that, in a way...something so big which Is destroyed must be stated like that


It'll Make Good Compost, I Guess

2020-05-05
I like the part
"that people find obscurity profound..."
indeed in the dark
hope is the hanger


Black

2020-05-05
don't be famous
for gossips I would say
we all not made up to
entertain people which
get back from work


Ramblings 505

2020-04-24
yes, you are right, and they wanted to change the world too, they proposed another world to the next generation


If at Easter we shared by Peter Donkin translated by Ann Wood

2020-04-21
...not how we kiss icons, but our enemies...
thank you


I by Ann Wood

2020-04-08
it is a very fresh poem


WORDS HAVE TO BE EXPRESED (Reponse To poetic pigrims Work -words)

2020-03-05
indeed, you can share something written on paper but the same in your mind is locked to yourself


equation solving

2020-03-05
impressionism. words written with dots. i like it


news

2020-02-27
indeed Lawrence, many people would pay the journalist to be on tv. in the end, the journalist wants to be paid.


I will

2020-02-23
a difficult task for me


T.A.D

2020-01-10
you should help me on this one
get blocked with acronyms


Gêne-toi pas, fille ! (Don't Be Shy, Girl!)

2020-01-10
you got a bossy one lol


WITH HOPE MY COMPANION (Spellings Corrections)

2020-01-01
i wish you an happy new year 2020, friend


Ramblings 489

2019-12-22
i wish you good luck and strength for the future. and for now, a merry christmas and happy new year 2020

best wishes from both of us
Albert and Aurelie


Thought Eyes

2019-12-15
pessoa, the portuguese poet wrote that "thoughts are a disease for the eyes." you made me remind this.


AS I WALK

2019-12-15
the wandering thoughts of a lonely man?


embrace

2019-12-15
a nice frame on a marvelous day


Okay, then!

2019-12-15
i like to hear hits on radio


Needed! by Ann Wood

2019-12-15
thank you


In the hospital waiting room by Ann Wood

2019-12-15
you are very funny and got delighted all around..


Tinder Goals

2019-12-15
the first point that reached my mind was to know if it was a man or a woman which had written this. easy to pinpoint the idea, tasteful indeed


Ebube and Dubem

2019-10-29
i love the rhythm you've instilled in your verses
i think it's a mark of your poetry


Autumn

2019-10-29
what a roll of new english words
i got here
thanks for sharing


We have a method by Ann Wood

2019-10-26
very smart, i have read enjoyed and most of all laughed out loud


[07 Sep - 19 Oct 2019] - PoetBay's at a major crossroad (Update 7)

2019-10-20
i've been away for a while, watching poetbay from a vantage point. i am now back...i like this place


I WRITE TO BE READ (Additans & Changes)

2019-10-17
i should have written:
you write consciously
you are read unconsciously


I WRITE TO BE READ (Additans & Changes)

2019-10-17
you are consciously writing
but not unconscious you are read
maybe paranoid lies between


WRITEING WHILE I - WE - CAN! (Completed)

2019-10-01
indeed. WW3 if it happens will be the last