| Unspoken Words
|
|
2026-08-06 Hi Shannon
I'm sure you're dad was and is
Very proud of you. I'm sure
He would never think of you as a failure.
And loved you very much.
|
| COME AND GO SOME REMAIN
|
|
2026-08-06 Very true ken
Although it would be nice to know
What's happened to them.
|
| slowly turning
|
|
2026-07-28 Hope you don't mind I've booked marked this.
It's strange to think that you have become,
A incredible talent for story writing.
By the by I not only forget I've boiled the kettle,
I make myself a cup coffee then forget to drink it.
As you probably guessed I enjoyed reading this.
Regards Alan
|
| Family Tree
|
|
2026-07-27 My brother thought he'd drop a bombshell by telling me ,
By telling me dad had been married before.
I think he was more shocked when I told him, "I know ".
|
| The Dream I Always Dreamed
|
|
2026-07-27 Hi Elakkiya
What a inspirational poem,
Sorry that I've only recently read this,
It touched my heart.
Regards Alan.
|
| I WILL KEEP ON TYPEING TAPING AWAY
|
|
2026-07-26 Glad to hear it ken
|
| Rain Clouds Somewhere
|
|
2026-07-24 Hi Peter
Lovely poem
|
| Auntie May
|
|
2026-07-21 What a lovely poem Marie.
Enjoyed reading your poetry,
As I always do.
Regards Alan
|
| a summer bug in the ear
|
|
2026-07-21 I seem to forget the summer bugs
Until they buzz around at night.
I try to brush them away,
But they always come back
for a bite. Enjoying your posts.
Keep up the good work.
Regards Alan
|
| Volumes
|
|
2026-07-19 Kindness and compassion,
Are not as rare as you may think.
Their are many that share those qualities,
That shine as bright as you.
Regards Alan
|
| MY BOOK LATEST NEWS!
|
|
2026-07-19 Well done Ken
Don't think I'll ever achieve that.
Regards Alan
|
| Conversations no 6
|
|
2026-07-03 Inspiration comes in many ways.
In my younger day's I was a bus conductor,
On a open top bus to beachyhead.
On the top of my waybill it read,
In inclement weather take bus to garage.
So I wrote and crossed out each one.
Inclomerated, Inclimented, inclomerated.
Then I wrote: it rained.
Nice to hear from you Marie.
Hope your in a fine fetal of health.
Regards Alan
|
| SIMPLE ACTS OF BALANCE
|
|
2026-05-25 This reminds me too much
Of when my mum passed away.
Thanks for sharing Allen.
Your mum would be proud.
Kind regards Alan.
|
| Fellow Poets of Poetbay
|
|
2026-05-25 Well put Sameen
I agree with every word
|
| Schematic
|
|
2026-05-25 As we read poetry comes alive,
proving the muse is alive and kicking in all of us.
|
| The Argument
|
|
2026-05-25 Nice one Sameen
|
| The Dance
|
|
2026-05-25 High Melinda.
I've often pondered on this,
Writing poetry that may be misconstrued.
Luckily I've only had one troll.
My philosophy has been to publish my scribbles,
Know matter what. As for people reading my poetry,
I'm happy that they do. As for your own poetry,
It's unique because it's written by you. Don't forget that,
And believe me when I say, you belong with the elite,
Here on poetbay.
Kind regards Alan
|
| Devils blood
|
|
2026-04-27 Hi dee
Sorry you feel that way I must confess,
I feel depressed everyday. So I sort of know
what your going through. I can feel the pain
in each word you've written, I agree with Ken.
You sound as though you have a lovely soul,
Don't believe you are bad in anyway, stop
listening to those thoughts that tell you that you are.
Their not what your God would want you to do.
Take care of yourself dee and know you have
found friends here on poetbay.
Regards Alan
|
| The Weight
|
|
2026-04-20 As a man I'm disgusted with this,
I feel anyone who rapes,
Should be castrated.
Especially when it's considered
That someone who's a rapist,
Doesn't get the punishment to
Fit the crime.
|
| The God Of Empire
|
|
2026-04-14 A very thoughtful poem,
Well written.
|
| IMPROPER TEA PARTY
|
|
2026-04-14 It's strange to think you can travel,
Far out into space and looking back at earth.
You can see the past, yet we can already do that
Within ourselves, to find an inner piece.
|
| Narrow Straits
|
|
2026-04-14 Although the contents sound dire,
A nicely expressed metaphor.
Even though you may believe there's
Choppy waters ahead, along the way,
May you sail your seas to a calmer life.
|
| before the ink runs dry
|
|
2026-04-14 May you're quill never fall silent
|
| Ramblings 733
|
|
2026-04-08 You've done for all the poeteers
What Lawrence did for Arabia.
And I mean in a spectacular way.
You are the Joan of arc of poetry,
Cherished by all here on poetbay.
Huge amount of hugs sent your way.
Xx regards from Alan and his tribe.
|
| I'm Only Human
|
|
2026-04-06 The hurt we endured when we were younger
Never truly goes away, Yet for others can
Never truly feel what we live with day by day.
My heart goes out to you my friend,
With hugs and kisses sent along the way.
Never ever give up upon yourself for,
We would truly miss you here on poetbay.
Regards Alan. You have a beautiful soul.
|
| Over Shifting Ground
|
|
2026-04-06 For the on lookers looked on,
In disbelief, For they saw him walk on water.
For they couldn't see the path beneath,
The waters edge displayed.
|
| A Leaf, before It Falls
|
|
2026-04-06 And what if,
A smile never happened.
|
| Apparemment pas
|
|
2026-04-06 Hi again
Although we're world's apart,
I feel the same way.
Everytime I'm with someone
Mentally I freeze. I have to
Know someone a long time
Before I can trust them, writing
and talking to strangers is for me
Two different things. I've opened
up a little since joining your poetbay.
Thanks for posting happy Easter
Dear friend. Regards Alan
|
| palimpsest
|
|
2026-04-01 Thanks for posting Melinda.
All I remember are my nighttime nightmares.
As I'm slowly drowning in my mind.
Regards Alan
|
| a pure player
|
|
2026-04-01 If he bets on the day of his death,
If he wins, How does he collect?
|
| Burnished
|
|
2026-03-30 Sounds like heaven
|
| The Council’s Verdict
|
|
2026-03-27 Hi Melinda from sunny Eastbourne,
Or so the brochures say.
All our little critters from,
The common ant carry with them,
Tiny little umbrellas.
Because it rains so much, even the stick insects
Always put their wellies on. The old centipede
Sometimes forgets that it may have rained,
He goes to his front door looks out and says,
" Oh no not again goes back inside ".
Then starts to put on his wellies once again.
Loved your poem. One of the poem's I wrote
Was called critters. Regards Alan.
|
| The Council’s Verdict
|
|
2026-03-27 Oops
|
| If We Knew
|
|
2026-03-25 Hi Melinda
I've written on this subject
Many times, And wondered;
If there's a insect heaven.
Where man has to stand for his crimes.
When he's knowingly committed insecticide?
I hope the punishment doesn't fit the crimes,
Otherwise we could all be guilty in their eyes.
Another great post.
Regards Alan
|
| Pen Pushers
|
|
2026-03-25 I don't think Spike,
In troubled times.
Lost his mind,
I think he found it.
Thanks for sharing.
John. Regards Alan
|
| Never 2 Old
|
|
2026-03-25 Loved this poem John.
With the rhythm and the flow,
From the beginning to the end.
Regards Alan.
|
| Laughter
|
|
2026-03-19 Dear Sona
Your definitely not stupid,
To laugh at oneself is to love life.
Thanks for sharing.
|
| And Leaves It There
|
|
2026-03-18 I found your poem very emotive
It's very easy to lose oneself in this way.
Even when you're surrounded by people
Regards Alan
|
| Eyes
|
|
2026-03-18 It's nice to see fresh eyes on poetbay,
Keep up writing.
Regards Alan
|
| The Men on the Street Corner
|
|
2026-03-03 Hi Melinda
The way some men treat you ladies
Is a true mistake, My heart breaks for one and all,
That are treated in this way. You've inspired
Me to to write about this poem.
Thanks for sharing. sorry you had to go through this.
Regards Alan
|
| Them
|
|
2026-03-02 Hi Sona
The only thing that can stop us,
Is ourselves. You have many
Friends on poetbay.
Don't forget that. Stay strong.
Regards Alan
|
| Raven Black
|
|
2026-03-02 Hello Dougie
I've not yet found a poem
Of yours that I didn't like.
It seems your muse is still helping you.
She was your inspiration for writing,
This excellent whimsical poem.
Regards Alan
|
| Lost
|
|
2026-02-28 Just ask yourself Peter,
How do you wish to spend eternity.
Smoking or none Smoking.
Regards Alan
|
| Through My Eyes
|
|
2026-02-27 Hi Melinda
A warm welcome from cloudy Eastbourne,
For giving me the opportunity to read.
Your excellent poetry. Your eyes
Must be a wonderful world to live in.
Hugs and kisses
Regards Alan
|
| No More Words
|
|
2026-02-18 High melinda
This was a very powerful poem.
My heart goes out to anyone,
Who had to suffer this. Hugs and kisses.
Regards Alan
|
| The ageing farmer....
|
|
2026-02-15 A few of my customers were farmers,
One of them told me at christmas time.
The supermarkets that brought from them,
Dropped the price of many items by half price.
But expected the farmers to bear the brunt of the price drop.
So they can make the same profits.
|
| Rebellion Is
|
|
2026-02-13 Rebellion is fighting a Dictator,
That's clearly gone insane.
Rebellion is standing up for the oppressed,
Like the people of Ukraine.
As you can probably see, while reading this.
My imagination ran away from me.
Thanks for sharing kee.
For blessed are those that think of others.
Regards Alan.
|
| Conversations no 5
|
|
2026-02-12 You know Marie
Although I haven't said,
I've read this many times,
Each time it brightens up my mind,
It's the little things we remember,
That brightens up our days.
|
| SOME
|
|
2026-02-11 Such is life Ken
|
| SOME SAY THEY WILL
|
|
2026-02-11 We used to call them,
Fair Weather friends.
Ken. Regards Alan
|