Just something


Don't you recognise me

Don't you recognise me
That we met oneday
You were in the train
Sitting beside me
The train then stopped
And I came down
After a while you found out
We exchanged our phone
And you raised your hand
Saying that I'm sorry
And I replied with a smile
It's ok......
Any day , Any time
If we meet
Please recognise me.





Words by Zainab
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Written on 2006-05-29 at 08:46

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Zainab
Thank you DAMON so much and everyone.
2006-06-08


Zainab
thank you teala :_)
2006-06-08


Teala
This is a lovely poem full of longing and hope--bravo!
2006-06-07


Zainab
Thanks again haseen and believe me I'll always recognise you :_)
2006-05-29



a very good poem zainab..once again keep on wrting and i hope you can recognized me...

GOD SPEED!!!!
2006-05-29


Zainab
Thank you so so much Dan Cederholm for liking my work ,You have made my day a big smile:-)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))!
2006-05-29


Dan Cederholm
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You are such a good writer!!!

I just loved this poem...

It's a bookmark too

Sincerly Dan


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2006-05-29


Zainab
Thank you kathy. And KJC like always for appreciating my work
2006-05-29


Zainab
I was in a very good mood it just came in my mind and I thought to share it with you all .
2006-05-29


Kathy Lockhart
I sense a longing for more from this meeting. You penned it nicely giving me vivid pictures of the meeting between the two people and the desires and hopes of the one. :) kathy
2006-05-29