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I wonder When

I wonder when,
my life will end

I wonder when,
My last breath is taken,

I wonder when,
I finally close my eyes,

I wonder,
Will I be remembered?

I wonder when i die,
Will they know why?

I wonder when life's little tunes,
Stop playing the lustres orchestra,
That is love, hate, anguish and laughter,
I wonder when it will end?

I wonder if my loved ones are okay,
And I wonder if ill see them one day.

I wonder when i will die
I hope it won't be soon,
But if it is this is one poetic way,
Of saying Good Bye.




Poetry by Christoffer Waye
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Written on 2006-06-02 at 12:03

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Teala
Ah..I wonder these things a lot as well--which is reflected in many of my texts.
2006-06-11


loulou
ALL I CAN SAY IS SAYING GOODBYE IS NEVER AN EASY THING!!!..NICE ONE HERE!
2006-06-10


Kathy Lockhart
well developed poem that speaks for so many in such a poetic way. "I Wonder When" is filled with wonder so in a word, it is wonderful! :) kathy
2006-06-07


Lourdes
..so do I ,, you just told it a hell lot better.
2006-06-04


Amanda Manmohan
Such a sad poem...full of truth though, because these are the same things that run through my head, as well as those of a lot of others. Well done.
2006-06-02


Malin Johansson
Yes we all walking around wondering when, instead we should be wondering around smiling at the things we have:)))
Good poem here
RGDS
2006-06-02



"....life's little tunes" that line just moved me.
When leaving is possible without wondering what staying is about.....
I just felt that.... deep within.
Hope things are good with you man. :_)
2006-06-02