15) Death is the only occasion


I'm afraid that someday water of seas will be placed by blood,
Flowers of gardens turn to mud,
That buildings will be constructed out of bones and rubs,
Inhabited by killed 's fractured skulls,
The one place where people would go is the grave
And the only occasion celebrated is Death,
If some humans believe in achieving
peace by cutting each other piece by piece .




Poetry by Amanda K
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Written on 2006-09-15 at 15:38

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Christoffer Waye
I like the strenght in you words givs a glint in the eye towards the end.
Great text
2006-10-10


Tina
Nearly a description of the End of Days, or Ragnarokk here in my country... Great written!
2006-10-04



Until or unless we can drain dry the ocean of omnipotence, till we break into pieces the towering mountains of Almighty strength, we never need to fear. In a world that seems to be spinning out of control, especially, out of the desire of man seeking religious superiority, let us not forget where our security lies.

Our true security lies not in the hands of our Leaders, guns, bombs and the destruction of those who may believe or think differently than we do, but our security lies in the "munitions of our immutable God." God's strength can never be emptied by Thy friends or rifled by Thy enemies. Let us this day, heed and incline our hearts to the verses of a blessed Hymn; "Now let the feeble all be strong
And make Jehovah's arm their song
So may we go from strength to strength
And daily grow in grace
Till in thine image raise at length
We see Thee face to face."
2006-09-22


Leif H T Strand
Back to the time of Jesus!
What kind of profet are you?
This could be taken from the bible...
2006-09-20


Emeka Chike Nwogu
This is deep. Pungent and straight to the point. I think we need more of these reminders to make our lives to be more shaped.
2006-09-18


David Hazell
Simply correct. Keep it up.. we may get through some day. needs to be said and said.
2006-09-15


keith nunes
heavy duty dark and why not - you have a licence to write anything. bliss! freedom. i think it's a great write full of potent images. and i share the vision - one day we're going to be f******
2006-09-15


Esti D-G The PoetBay support member heart!
And I thought my poetry was dark! What an excellent write of a nightmare scenario that may really happen if we don't change our blood thirsty ways.
luv esti
2006-09-15