put on your black dress
float on your back
and hey ,



take your hat off girl when you're talking to me


~ a text written for dead-banjo , fuzz-guitar and the echo of loud chewing


sweet psychoplastic bitch

When you open your words to let out
cheap sirens and rubber snakes
I could never join the demented applause
because your grace is so bought and fake

a yeah ; and the choir sings :
ohlalala
The only thing that is interesting about you
must be the total lack of interesting in everything you do
ohlalala
I really tried so hard to pay attention to you today
but it hurts to meet a person with so much nothing to say

and you know

If there only was a way to plant a tree in your canyon
God knows Id try
But the seasons of your opinions
are equally dry

sweet psychosplastic slide

When you open your mouth to speak more
pieces of your mind falls out
I try to pick them up to avoid a leak
of toxic waste on my forest friendly teak floor


a yeah ; the choir sings :
ohlalala
The only thing not sad about you
must be the thing that YOU don't even have a clue
ohlalala
about the fact that your major lack of intelligence
totally matches the void behind your contact lens

sweet psychodramatic menopausequeen

When you open this poem and read please
remember to take your hat off when you're dealing with me
because next time I wont be so fucking discrete
about your total absence of personality

and the choir sings :
ohlalala
... (fading)




Poetry by Lourdes
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Written on 2006-10-16 at 00:01

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salem
yes it's great rant
thanxxxxxxxxxxx
2006-12-09


English War Veteran aged 98
oi old timer ! Whos that about?
Not the old duffer at the Ryan Air desk who was giving us grief about our wheel chairs?!
2006-10-17


Zainab
I really like your heading ^^
2006-10-16


Kathy Lockhart
I love your brain! This is bookmarked for future use. When I need to growl, laugh, and say Amen, I will read this.
Love, love, love you daughters,
mother
2006-10-16



Yes, a really good rant, been taking lesson? springs to mind!lol...mind you, there are plenty of bitches as you describe in this ranty poem, on the net to keep most pot shotters happy lourdes! Well done. Tai
2006-10-16


Ananim
ohlala

when it comes down to the crunch
you fucken pack a punch

as surely as you frown
kick them when they're down!

ohlala
2006-10-16



Wow. This is a great rant and I hope that this person will get the message!
2006-10-16