Broken, lonely and miserable....


Darkness covered my vivid skies,

As the melancholic moon rised

Fetching all blessed moments we went through,

Creating such anguish for me, out of you

"Angels never hurt" once i believed

I wish i didn't, i wouldn't have greived

Im yearning over my ruined heart

As my desperate soul is ready to depart

Leaving non-existant love in me

Crashing like wrecked ships, into waves of my sea




In memory of me, you and my severly broken heart...

May god forgive you sweetheart...

If he did i might consider the option of forgiving you...

Love, hate and me.....



Poetry by maxmedo
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Written on 2006-10-16 at 02:30

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Esti D-G The PoetBay support member heart!
Excellent poem, Max.
Bookmarked with luv!
2008-09-20


Zachary P. B.
this is good. this is really good...

z
2006-10-18


wee2souls
a powerful write within your heart..
feel the pain here:))
hugs to you:)
cindy
2006-10-17


R.
"Fetching all blessed moments we went through,

Creating such anguish for me, out of you"

Immense power in these lines. Unfortunately relatable. Thank you.
2006-10-16