This is for my friend Michelle who just had a break up.


Love Explosion

Life's a funny thing when hearts go astray
One little problem just ruins your whole day
The future was bright, I could see the light
Go dim in a second, I was left alone
What happened threw me off course
They had no feeling, they had no remorse
They left me to deal with the pain
I didn't want to go through this cycle again
Where for nights I would cry and would wonder why
Why our love had suddenly died
The storm was almost over and could see some hope
Some help to my dreadful uphill slope
My friends were here healing my spite
With these angels by my side I would be alright
Life's a funny thing when hearts go astray
One little problem just ruins your whole day




Poetry by Coolaaron88
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Written on 2006-11-02 at 05:31

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PrincessPebbles
Oh so sweet!!! You're friend Michelle is so lucky to have you! Great Poem!
2006-11-06


kayce
This is a lovely poem, with woderful rhymes. when your friend reads it she would be glad she has you as a friend.
2006-11-02


Xuxa
A wonderful poem! Beautifully expressed. I hope your friend enjoys it! =)
2006-11-02


Dan Cederholm
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Oh my GOD, This is a GREAT POEM!!!

and with so superb rhymes it goes directly

to my heart! It is just like a good song and

with all the pain and suffering in it . . .

it is outstanding!!!


Regards to you Aaron!!!

Dan

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2006-11-02


lastromantichero The PoetBay support member heart!
Hi there Aaron this si a lovely caring text for your friend well done i am sure she loves it rgds mike
2006-11-02