lord has planned something for everyone, and everything has a time (period) defined for it, if you miss the opportunity, you lose everything.........


)): *~._ I AM SORRY YET AGAIN _.~* :((

Baby maybe I hurt you,
But doing that wasn't my aim.

And every time i did that,
My heart went very a lame.

Dear I just forgot, I called you where.
Even though I wanted, I couldn't be there.

It was so frantic of me to say,
Meet me here right on this day,

And it's so sick of me,
I couldn't makeup there,
You must have searched me everywhere.

But dear I really wasn't able,
I know this may sound a little fable.

I know your waiting eyes,
Went wet 'coz of me.
I also know a bit ignorant I was trying to be.

But for every pearl,
That rolled down your cheeks,
When at the rusty gate you restlessly eyed
Day and night with pain I cried.

I still remember how I passed,
That sleepless night,
I struggled hard with all my might,
To catch your sight when had fight.

I know I am a loser,
I am the one.
And today I remember those words,
Words I heard a decade ago,
When a mother told her son,
"Remember my child,
Time and tide wait for none "


... ... ...
I lost my time, I lost my life,
I am losing my breathe,
And I hope when I die,
You'll come to my coffin,
With a beautiful wreath.

Dear I still love you,
I know it sounds a bit funny,
But believe my words,
Trust me honey


Even though if today,
From this world I fade away,
I'll always regret for my delay,
On that day.
But my love for you will always be the same,
i am extremely sorry, yet again.








You'll forever live in my heart,

you and your love are.............

*~._NEVER GONE_.~*





Poetry by zeeshan
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Written on 2006-12-22 at 19:47

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charley60
This was very beautiful. An apology, a hurt for keeping her waiting. Your words said so much and were so full of love and wanting to be there but couldn't. Time is indeed fleeting for it waits for no one. I loved this write. You are a very good writer.
2007-01-30


betsy Firefly
An amazingly deep apology!
2007-01-19


Zainab
I didn't visit you long time
But I have something to tell you
You really improved so much in your writing style I start loving ur poems especially this one
Great work
Keep that kind heart
Always with you! d:
2007-01-09


tony legba
Zeeshan, this is emotional and has a
wide range of ideas. It reads like a
number of different poems collected into
one: the different techniques get in the
way a bit, at times, and distract the
reader. Probably, as a writer, you have
got to the point where you need more
formal control so as your emotional
ideas are fully released--ambitious! (Sorry about the bad typing previously) :)
2006-12-25


tony legba
Zeeshan, this is emotional and has a wide range of ideas. It reads like a number of different poems collected into one: the different techniques get in the way a bit, at times, and distract the reader. Probably, as a writer, you have got to the poiny where you need more fromal control so as your emoitional ideas are fully released--adventurous!
2006-12-25


Amanda K
very gentel. coming from a haeart that's sincerely sorry and is still in love.

keep it up,
2006-12-23


Kathy Lockhart The PoetBay support member heart!
zee this is a very sweet and sincere apology; I hope she accepts this tender poem of regret.
2006-12-22