i lost her , i never wanted to, i wish she was only hurt , i could have convinced her, but how do i bring her back from heavens.


~~~~~drowned~~~~~


10 hours ago..........



(i am seated on my couch , and she's standing by the door, her back towards it, and facing me with rage.)



i am sorry for i hurt u dear,
i am sorry i made u shed this tear.
it was a misunderstanding, please
dont leave take it at ease.

oh! shit, oh! wait.
where you goin'
i commited this mistake ,
without knowing.

i left my contact at the bottom,
you must not have got them.
you see i had an urgent meeting,
but i also had mailed you a greeting.
i remember its our anniversary today,
go see i've even posted a poem at the bay.

(i am up on my feet and she's almost up to blast of anger and cry)


oh ! wait please keep your cool,
no i swear , i am not tryin' to fool.

dear i am sorry , see i am back home,
and you are no more home alone.

i know i told you , i'll call you later,
but please dont you call me a traitor.
i was busy you aee,
not even a second i was free.

oh! comeon i wasn't sleeping with any bitch,
and please dont call me a ditch.

(she has opened the door and is almost half way out, and i pounce at her to stop her)

wait dear don't,
whe.....where you leaving.

no... not the car.

ohhh!!! the car........

no don't take!!!!!!!!!

oh my life it has got no brake.

(she's standing at the car door , n i am still near the door)


please come back i beg,
i catch my ears , i bow to your leg.


(she left in fury , in no seconds she's outa my sight)

taxi........oh f****** taxi!!!!!!,
follow that car,
and no matter if it goes too far.
i'll pay you more than you can think,
but please drive fast , before your blood i drink.


noooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


oh !! oh !! oh!! my god!,
she crashed..................

oh somebody help, she's drowning,
save please,
i beg you , i come to my knees.





present............................................................................



crawling and creeping,
on the shore.
greiving with sorrow,
for you are no more.

and just when i was thinking,
you left me lone.
rolled down, a companion,
a tear,a friend , a pearl.

and so careless i was,
that i let it slip.
and now that i have even lost him forever,
maybe some where i the midst of the sea,
where i lost you,

but now that i know this bitter truth,
that neither he nor you, can ever be mine.
i walk the depths of this killer sea ,
to be all thine.



..............................................................our love is eternal















Poetry by zeeshan
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Written on 2007-02-05 at 11:15

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Kathy Lockhart
wow, this is an excellent story with great imagery and twists. Well done Zee. xx mom
2007-02-13