Sometimes we feel blue,sad and disappointed and feelings as i will mention below attack us. I wish you like the poem.


42) Indifferent

Do you know when you eat without feeling the taste.
You know when you look without catching the beauty.
Know when you dance without melody .
When you walk without recognizing the way.
Feeling every sense of decay.
When life corridors sound hollow and dark.
When many questions seem losing their questions' marks.
And many answers have lost their track.
When among this crowd you feel lonely and bad.
And amid of all the voices you feel nothing inside.
Just going with the flow.
Just wandering between thoughts.
And hiding pain and tears,
In the petals of years.
Wishing it to end fast;
And get rid of present, future and past.
Murdering sadness and collapse,
That is conquering your lands.
When you have no weapon but pads.
To put onto the wounds ;
That keep bleeding and hurt to the core.
Make you wonder if they will ever stop.
Releasing your heart from such sores.
I think those moments attack us all.





Poetry by Amanda K
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Written on 2007-02-26 at 07:09

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F.i.in.e Moods The PoetBay support member heart!
somehow skipped this one in your list :/ good thing i checked again :) this is really poignant stuff... i think you're right when you say we all get to feeling stages like that in our lives... they are sore times, but they usually follow through to better and nicer moments... it's how it goes eh... the ups and downs - emotions we all know them in some way or another...

"When many questions seem losing their questions' marks.
And many answers have lost their track." - love the imagery of this line... really enjoyed this poem... *hugs* xx
2007-04-05


brian paglia
this is an awesome piece and I can't say enough about the ways your poetry relates to my life.Absolutely excellent!!!!
2007-03-03


Will
Very Much ENJOYED INDEED!!!
2007-02-26


Janine>K
moment like that attack us all...you have such a nice style Amanda
love reading your poems especially this one..great work once again
Keep well
JK
2007-02-26