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...Heart Beat...

My heart beats fast and slow
All at the same time,
Fast when I look at you,
When I think of you
And when you smile back at me.
Slow when I think of me
Living my life without you,
Slow when I imagine your absence
Instead of your noticeable presence.
My heart beats more and more
When I think you have to go,
My heart may not beat anymore
If you stay away too long.



Poetry by kip
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Written on 2005-11-23 at 19:58

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Natalie
Naaw it's so cute :)
2006-01-23


Zoya Zaidi
My heart pounds when you touch me,
A feel an elation clutch me!
Or it goes just boom puty boom,
When you suddenly enter the room!
My heart races like mare unbriddled,
When with you my passion is kinddled!
So, the heart has many speeds,
But, towards you it always speeds!

((((lovely right daer kip)))))
((((It really inspired me))))
((((Thanks for sharing your speed))).

Love, xxx, Zoya
2006-01-23


Peter
a really nice write!!
and I agree with the words...
keep it up!
2006-01-23


Teala
Wow--very good, romantic.
2005-11-24


penfold18
I like the heart in this it has content and is well thought through well done :-)
2005-11-23