60) Wound of LOVE


Wound given by love,
Is enough to make your heart cry your whole life.
You cannot buy it a medicine.
No doctor can heal;
The way you feel after your beloved leaves.
Dark hours pass darker,
Cold days colder,
And again the wound comes stronger.
You think it will ease as times fly, what a lie!
For when the memory hunts your mind,
All resistance does collapse.
Who can forget at once?
One who was a part of his heart?
Finally sum that he can live afterwards with ease and fun.
It will forever be fresh,
And get wider the wound love caused no one can fight it.




Poetry by Amanda K
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Written on 2007-05-13 at 00:25

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Janine>K
You describe your pain so delicately like I almost had your broken heart in my hands..This is so sad really hope that this broken heart heals and all the pain will be nothing but a faint memory... well written very well done!!
2007-05-23


uma
yeah exactly...you penned my wounded heart.
2007-05-13


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Amanda Panda
this is a beautiful love text and as accurate as any i have read
there is no stomach ache as the ones that emit from lost love

a heart rending text

and so sad
rgds mickey mouse
2007-05-13


Rob Graber
Nice effect here in lines 6 and 7!
2007-05-13


Hagzissa
You'll never forget... but the pain will be lighter as time goes... But there's no point in fighting the pain... sometimes it just has to hurt for a while.
2007-05-13